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Drieks wrote a new post
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I like how you repeat that couplet at the end. It wraps everything up in a neat package. This is a really cool piece with sociopathic undertones which catch my attention. I love an unreliable narrator. I love an evil genius. A lot of women do… the bad boy syndrome. Boys grow up to be devils. And girls… well, sometimes we invite them in.
Nice piece!
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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
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Ya know, I would love to sit down one day with a cup of coffee, a cat & a fire just to read your entire collection. You never…not once…disappoint, my friend
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PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos) wrote a new post
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Brilliantly penned, PAR. Into the book it belongs! This may be your masterpiece my friend, or perhaps one of many masterpieces in your case. It’s incredible dialogue but their tongues speak poetry, not just casual conversation words. Damn, this was Chef’s Kiss. Thanks for sharing my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerfully penned, Drieks. Thanks for sharing my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian