Aww its funny how one remembers their first time. This is well written

Powerfully penned, Thomas. The pain of a broken heart can often lead one into the arms of alcohol. It promises the world only to consume its host. Excellent write my friend, I can relate. Appreciate you.

Damian

Those first moments of heartbreak are all consuming. I still remember mine like yesterday too…

Yes, vivid and sharp. Thank you.

Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Totally relate…

Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you so much.

Amazing story. The shoes we wear say a lot about who we are. I like the Hendrix lyric “His dusty boots are his Cadellac”
Regards
james

Thank you, my friend. I appreciate it.

I want so badly to get off the current train. Brilliant, Thomas

Brilliantly penned, Thomas. Outstanding write my friend. Beyond furious with that damn train. Appreciate you.

Damian

Love it! Great work and some marvelous detail in such a short poem.

This is a dark and cutting vision of now.
Regards James

Thank you.

Dude you write very clear with a natural tint, not slutty. Although you get your point across through nature and travel makes it sizzle. Tight

Beautifully penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Great work. It flows and hits hard.
Regards James

I wonder how many lost leaves are drifting on vagabond winds. This is beautiful and aching and hopeful all rolled in one perfect poem