From the first line to the last, I was caught up in this

Brilliantly penned, Thomas. This is an incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Outstanding poem Thomas. Love it!!

Thank you.

Thank you.

I love the vague references and allusions, the metaphorical array of madness and symbolism. You can certainly feel the missteps and empathize with the devastation. As with all good poetry, I can read this in several different ways.

It’s a piece that keeps calling you back, Thomas… like a final glance behind you at a beautiful woman passing by.

Thank you. I appreciate it.

Brilliantly penned, Thomas. Into the book it belongs! Phenomenal storytelling my friend. Fantastic read my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you, my friend.

This is outstanding. Well written and marvelously descriptive. I like this.

Thank you.

Thanks

Powerfully penned, Thomas. Another incredible write my friend, I can relate to this one. Appreciate you.

Damian

Heavy write Thomas. This is quite powerful.

Thank you.

Powerfully penned, Thomas. This is very good my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

An excellent write, Thomas! “)

Wonderfully executed. Great work here.

Thank you. Much appreciated.

Brilliantly penned, Thomas. A flawless write my friend. Like this one a lot. Appreciate you.

Damian

It’s like Tom Sawyer Comes of Age! LOL. Why should you have backed out? Maybe you better not answer that. Anyway, it all sounds fantastically romantic, and I love the rough, woodsy imagery and casual intimacy. An epic poem about an epic experience, Thomas.

Great atmosphere. I can feel every move you make with this poem. Wonderful in execution & delivery.