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Chère C.,
Yes, heartfelt (says Damian), and I won’t disagree.
I sincerely hope that you’ll encounter things that makes your heart stay.
You deserve it!
Love your writes.
Warm regards, Gus
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Read Morethere’s a momentright after the breakwhere sound hangswith its breath heldsuspended in the roomevery surface waitin to see if I rise or rupture my chest burns thinlungs made of paper pulse misfirin thru my wrists in broken rhythmand I keep...
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Man the end sounds like “The End”.
You bring me into your world of music and I have to say wow. Well done -
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Brilliantly penned, 253. You’re killing it brother, some pieces never truly return from the performance, sacrificial lambs to feed the beast, possibly? Excellent storytelling my friend, dig the layers, they seem to wake up thoughts in my head. Great series. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreMy body is a sunken mausoleum. Within is a ghostly spirit who's restless. Sunken as my once youthful plump cheeks. Within is a reticent tongue that lashes no more. Youthful blushes replaced by the cold purple of twilight. The twilight...
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Life has taken all the youth from you. Sad piece. But done well
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This is a touching dark and sad, but as always beautifully written piece, dear Daniel!
To me, wrinkles are first of all a sign of a life that has been lived. Shared joy and enthusiasm, and the hardships which came with new opportunities to grow, as well.-
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As always, vielen dank! I’m still young but I feel sad and alone. Writing is my only way to vent now.
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Read Morethe tempo liftsshy at firstbut hunger cracks thrua wingbeat mistimedthen anotherand suddenly I’m breathin wrongtoo quicktoo muchoxygen volatile in my chest notes climb without grace right hand runninchasin ghosts up the scaleleft hand anchorin low a heartbeat gnashin its teeth color floods the...
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A choice has to be made, a step must be taken. Enjoying the series
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Powerfully penned, 253. Excellent write my friend. Sounds like falling in quicksand at first, then embracing the fear and just going for it, improvising all the possible outcomes while dodging the bullets wizzing by. Loving this series, all your lines are precise laying out the story and working in unison. Hell Yeah. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read Moreleft hand dropsbefore I even think like a reflexlow notethen anotherstones into deep waterripples climbin my spine faster than sound can name them wrist turns without hesitationmuscle memory sharp efficient polished reflexes taught by someone else’s rhythmthe chord lands green...
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It feels like there is fear here.bto strike the keys to get the perfect tune.
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Powerfully penned, 253. Excellent write my friend, feels like the muse gets what she needs in the end. I couldn’t pick a verse though, because they’re all fucking tight. Nice work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. A very heartfelt write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian