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Read MoreI sit here in silence as I watch my mother go through the ceremonial lighting of the candle. This is not something bad; it is the norm for our family. Once a year, we all, the female patriarchy of...
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Thanks, Damian. I was trying to think how a young person would convey what is going on in their own way. Not all of them come straight out and say anything.
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Truly beautiful.
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Thank you, Thomas. It is a hard thing for most people to read.
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Marvelous write. Well done.
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That means alot, Keith. Thank you;))
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Read More"I am forever walking upon these shores,Betwixt the sand and the foam.The high tide will erase my foot-prints,And the wind will blow away the foam.But the sea and the shore will remainForever” Khalil Gibran *** I guess I shouldn’t be surprised the...
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Superb work. You bring this to vivid life.
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Thank you for reading and sharing the compliment. Its much appreciated.
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! This was incredible storytelling, and I even welled up with tears, I knew that the Butterfly and professor was a metaphor for something really going on. Powerful ending, the foreshadowing was precisely executed. Thank you for sharing. Appreciate you.
Damian