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Read Moreripped from the mouth of sound a gapin holewhere hammer should break bone hands dropivory grindin under skinsilence echos where it used to strike scale shattersedges crackinbroken teeth in the dark chords crawl forwarddraggin themselvesthru blood and tone I slam the weight downagainagainas...
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appreciate it
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I like the brutal choice on words.
I can sense a lot of toughness from the writer.
This is slightly mentally challenging in a way that captivates the reader.
Ready for some more…
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thank you Rosie
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“chords crawl forward
draggin themselves
thru blood and tone”Powerfully penned, 253. Excellent write my friend it always gets interesting when the piano is mentioned in your work. So many great lines but the one above just spoke to me. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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appreciate you Damian…always an easier write when involve piano.
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Read Morehottie with the body gimme some love i want it sick rub me vicious with only bad intentions soft hands getting me rock hard keep it intense try my patience jump on as i pin you to the wall open up wide fuck you raw get down on your knees suck it...
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Well…damn… It has a vibe you can almost put music to and hear it at night. Yup…naughty nights;)
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Fuck Yeah!! This is XXX in all it’s glory!
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Crimson, your poem reads much of laden sadness and reluctance. Love sometimes becomes distorted and misrepresented in relationships when love, respect, integrity and honesty is not reciprocated.
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it’s true those are vital to a healthy relationship thank you graciously ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I can sense a shattered emotional connection.
Decaying miserably, upon disrepair.
Healing is what matters the most going forward. x
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hello lovely Rosie it’s true but sometimes there is no healing I’m schizophrenic and as such I have always accepted less than… thank you for the love on this write ❤️
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thank you dearest Adagio for the love on this ❤️
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A musical genius. Prince was just built different when it comes to talent and creativity my friend. Awesome song, the whole soundtrack is amazing. Also I’m a fan of the movie. Morris Day playing his rival as the frontman of “The Time”. So many memories. Appreciate you – Damian
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Love the movie too watched so much could almost have recited everyone’s part
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The “cut it off, cut it all the way off ” Just screams “I don’t want this anymore” This holds a lot emotion