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Poetspeak wrote a new post
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Hi P.,
I may have told you I’m a quarter French.
And in France you can get away with pretty much anything as long as you mind your language.
Like this one. Direct, no unnecessary chatter, love it!
Needless to say I’m a huge fan of your writes.
Kind regards, Gus-
There used to be TV show called DRAGNET. The main character played a police detective and he was known for saying “just the facts” .
So Gus, that’s what I modeled my writing on. Just the facts. Say what I want to say and not much more.A blow job doesn’t need many words, just the passion of someone giving and someone getting …
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Passionately penned, Speak. Another excellent write my friend. You always bring you A-game when it comes to telling a story or painting us a picture. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hahaha, don’t know if you intended the humor but it’s there. What else is there to do while waiting on a mile of rail cart. To be honest we really miss those long trains passing by forcing the entire south to slow down even more. America doesn’t use but a fraction of it’s railway potential anymore, we use to move shit
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
My Land
I was told this was home
I was given it on silver plater
They fail to tell me that I would have to steal itWords written on paper was crafted beautifully
Penmanship to die for
That was it…
The hidden messageTo die for
I can not take what is not mine
Can land really be mine
The oil and coal pillage from m…Read More2 Comments-
In Indigenous culture and belief, no one owns the land, we inherit it and are part of it and must share and protect it, leaving it in better shape for future generations. I think this is a much better culture, belief, and morality than what we have in today’s world. I like your poem because it points to this kind of understanding. A very fitting…Read More
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twofiftythree wrote a new post
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twofiftythree posted in the group National Poetry Month
the willin fool
you place the blade
in my hand
and somethin in your voice
makes it feel right
somethin given just to me
b/c I earned itand I…
dumb enough to believe you…
hold it careful
watchin the light settle
along the surface
before bringin it to my mouth
slow
draggin my tongue
along the edge
tastin what you pro…Read More - Load More Posts
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Haha,,,I love how you show what is happening all around. Then the let’m wait had me smiling