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Read MoreBlood and bad breath The taste of morning Blood and coffeeAnemic breakfast Blood and kissesDrowning in dreams Blood and bladesSink deep in flows Blood and loveA prisoner inside myself Blood and beerDespair to be savored Blood and silenceEmptiness thinks Blood and snowI...
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Read MoreYou sat on the couch, absorbed in something when I slithered onto your lap, wearing just a sundress. I wriggled around and plucked at your shirt, avoiding eye contact, and blushing a little. So, you knew. “You get cute when you’re...
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You are really good at short story writing. You caught the attention and kept raising the stakes. Oh man its good.
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Thank you sweet Fia. Just stretching the fingers to see where they end … I appreciate you providing a venue for that exploration.
Thanks again for the kind feedback!
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Passionately penned, Betty. Amazing storytelling my friend. This write is also hotter than two demons fucking! lol. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Two demons fucking sounds pretty hot. (Are their wieners pronged like their tongues? WHAT?! OMG!)
Hey friend, I also appreciate you. Rock on Damian.
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Hot Erotica Star! xx
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Thank you my friend!
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You’re truly welcome, Betty. I’m published 8x over on Amazon, and I can truly say there are 2 blends of sex and erotica out there: filthy dirty sweary red hot (check out My Pregnant Pause and Joely’s Swim LIVE here) and you write that brilliantly!!! Or there’s the subtler, less crude erotica – like my BEINGS – which sells more and got 5-star amazon reviews from women readers. Might be worth you experimenting? HJ Furl xx
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Read MoreHere comes the man of mirrorsThe mirrors on the man mirroring the roomWith the furniture having a conversationA painting on the wall:A horse trampling a bouquette of flowers Horses in me, and out of me, trampling the soul. A hand of...
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hello dearest ME I myself don’t know where my poems come from this a great glance into your soul ❤️
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I believe my poems are a part of me. They come from my subconscious. 🙂
Thank you my friend for reading and support! Highly apprecited! <3
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Thank you, Damian! Highly appreciated “)
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This is a hell of a write, my friend — very powerful; but I see a typo, I think, when you wrote, “In a battle of write and earse” when I believe that last word should be “erase,” yes?
Also, you may not be aware of the big LISTEN button that now lives on this page and no doubt many more of yours as well as many others who labour but are not aware of our unwanted AI reader who has hitch-hiked on the work of everyone who has not attached the #excludetx tag to their work.
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Thank you brother for reading and the comment. Also for both the correction and exclude tag. I appreciate it! “)
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This is quite mind-blowing.
I admire the punchy and reflective lines through each stanza.
I can sense this is a personal piece, it describes an emotional journey taking place.
It is enlightening and tragic at the same time.
A pleasure to take in. x
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Thank you, Rosie C! It means so much to me. It is indeed a personal piece. “)
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Dude…This is a kick ass piece. Your writings always intrigue me.
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Thank you, Keith! Highly appreciated. “)
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That carries a stark rhythm, the triple negation (“no man shall endure nor beast”) gives it a biblical, almost covenantal tone. The phrase “monstrous loneliness” works well because it personifies isolation as something with appetite and form. Appreciate you.
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Thank you PAR for reading and the feedback! I appreciate you as well. “)
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A great mystery unfolds. The nature of the muse.
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Thank you, Knight! I appreciate ir. “)
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Read MoreYou brought out the chocolate fondue and the platter of fruit, and then, the world was audacious enough to exist. Fuckers. But I never stopped looking back at the neglected supplies, just dropped where they were. Because that’s a real kink I...
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Bravo!
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Thank you!
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Passionately penned, Betty. Excellent write with lots of sticky layers my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. If it’s not sticky you’re doing it wrong… amIright?!
What?!
Hey. Appreciate you back sweet friend.
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Pretty sensational! xx
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Thank you darling, glad you liked it
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When I am alone and there’s no-one else in the house, I promise to turn up the soundtrack to full volume, sit back, and petrify my prim n proper English neighbours! xx
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… as I add cocoa to my coffee. (I always have. LOL)
Your decadence is showing! I am betting that no weight was gained throughout the indulgence!
You have a knack for writing what everyone can see, feel, try, without it becoming over-debauchery. It’s pin point and relatable to all, with their own wishes.
And the bluntness is real world, not fluffy and not mega-porn.
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Well damn, the skirt is short enough. I hope that shit is showing! But don’t look because siblings looking at peeking decadence is still weird in Florida!
Thank you brother. I appreciate you.I have a good handful of these pieces I want to work through before I get into longer erotica. That’s the next venture… wish me luck and keep holy water nearby to wash your eyeballs out.
Thanks for braving my food porn!
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This drips with grit and shadow—each line a pulse of pain and dark devotion.
You’ve poured the body’s ache and the soul’s rust into a river of red, unafraid to bleed.