Cleverly penned, M.E. This is a very witty write my friend, amazing work. Appreciate you.

Damian

Very creative. Excellent work.

Thanks buddy! Highly appreciated! “)

Hmm, no one was wounded, you say. Cupid was shot. lol this is good;)

You made my day with your sweet comment. I am glad you liked it. Thank you! “)

This is the first and only piece of yours I have read so far. I must admit, I am intrigued. I stumbled upon you only because you were online (so few are at one time, I have found). But I like it very much; you made me smile with your shots at Cupid, and oh, yes, th little fucker has messed up so many lives, yes? However, I have ulterior motives as well. I am trolling for writers who use audio in their work. We now have a new category for what we do here: Spoken Word, and I am looking for those of us who do that. If so, or you just want to explore the possibilities, hit me back and let’s talk. I think you know HER; aske her about it.

I was trying to get a Spoken Word group going here, but that fell through; however, I did manage to get a Spoken Word category for us when we publish pieces — or edit them — if you have audio embedded on the page. We now have a pretty good start at a Spoken Word library if you check it out. Jut choose CATEGORIES on the main banner, then Spoken Word on the dropdown.

Moving verse with mystery woven in.
Regards James

Well done ink

Bat

Beautifully penned, M.E. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Very interesting dialogue. Is this internal or external?
It is not about painting, I agree. nice work

Tremendous metaphor. Superb work.

Thank you my friend!! I appreciate it “) <3

Thank you, brother! I appreciate it “)

Thank you, Rosie C for the love and comment! “)

This is deeply, thought-provoking.

I like the use of numbers in this. It makes it look like a list in the structure of a poem.

It’s different and inspiring. I can sense a lot of patience from the writer in this piece.

Captivating choice of words. I’m slightly hooked in. x

Powerful. Stay alive.

Powerful and profound… The Samurai believed that everyday one should consider oneself already dead. That we should meditate daily on death in the worst possible ways. Tis far out… Takes great bravery to endeavor upon such reflections. That is the kind of bravery I see here. The bravery to gaze into the abyss, which is perhaps an inevitability. Very nicely done thoughtsdie.