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hello beautiful Betty I’ve missed you very much out of all the people I know I’m happy this poem spoke to you I hope you are doing well me I’m wandering ❤️thank you for being here…
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write as always my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian for the love on this write ❤️
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Read More“In the company of imageries within my castle, I voice for everyone my next poetic verse. All the empty halls listen and echo my passion, And in darkly rich verse I immerse.” Through the courtyard, pulls up a hearse, Beneath the arms of stone...
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This is so dark and haunting. fav line is “Their shrill shadowed the echo through these hollow halls,
“The dark-suited burial conveyance led amiss of a poet’s demise.”
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Read MoreBiden calls it values.The missile is indifferent.The end justifies the means. Trump calls it winning.Facts are negotiable.The end justifies the means. Putin calls it history.Graves are future tense.The end justifies the means. Xi calls it harmony.Silence is compliance.The end justifies the means. Netanyahu...
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Very good. I just read that Musk said that death is faulty design and in the future we will figure out how to fix it.
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Thanks Fia.
Don’t normally agree with Elon but he is right that death will be eventually defeated by science but probably only for the rich.
You wouldn’t want the poor living forever now ..would you.
Seriously,who really wants to live forever..not me.
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Cleverly penned, Peter. Powerful write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreThe Terror In The Community. The community was designed as a euphoric cornucopia of green, lush plant life, all underwater in a 25-gallon tank. Introducing into this tank were three. You heard me, three fanciful goldfish. One was an Oranda that...
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Cleverly penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend, I always enjoy your amazing storytelling. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. Maurice is going to have my blood pressure up. lol
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Fantastic. Love it, Fia.
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Thank you Atticus;))
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Why not just flush Maurice?? Get rid of the non team player! maybe he can go rule the sewers or something, LOL.
I’m just being logical! Or put his ass with a male Beta (Japanese Fighting fish). No more Maurice!-
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lol I have a friend that said I should send Maurice to meet Davey Jones Locker in the toilet too. lmao. Thank you Stxian
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Chère F.,
I’d love it if this would find you mellow and at ease, just before the weekend.I’ve read your poem and I don’t understand it.
blunt Dutch analysis.
But I love the kiss by Brancusi (singer museum Leiden the Netherlands) without understanding too.
I love some of Rothko’s work too.Understanding isn’t always about what you/I can grasp at any time!
I love this write of yours and I think it’s raking me a little more time.So:
Please be patient with me!
I’ll be back, I promise! Have a very nice weekend…..
Warm Waving from a distance, Gus-
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Thank you Gus, its not a poem its a short story. I have a goldfish that is a bully. lol Have a good weekend.
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Cook Maurice and have him as an appetizer. He’d be with you forever. Great story Fia.
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Lmao no way. thank you Vision
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This starts playful but slowly tightens into something darker.
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That is so true Thomas. Thank you
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Clean slate works also. Lol
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Maurice met an untimely death. lol Thank you CasketSharpe;))
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I think you’ll need to build a little underwater jail and keep Maurice there as punishment.
This was great, yes it’s frustrating that your fishes kept dying but I love how you told this story not just as the observer but almost like a deity that you had power but they kept dying on you while you weren’t looking.
Awesome work.
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I’ve missed reading your introspective heart. Beautiful as always.