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good evening dearest Adagio thank you graciously the song put me in a slightly hypntic state beinging forward what was aready in my thoughts thank you very much ❤️
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The whole piece is great but that opening line is magic.
It also reminds me of the movie Dune.
The desert sands look so smooth and soft.
My older son told me once they remind him of butter. lolMark and I had a conversation today about the Sahara desert and how years ago it had an oasis.
How time and the earth can shift!I think I’m inspired now to write about the desert!
You rock chica!
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hello beautiful Adelphina you have a lovely soul and I love where your inspiration took you… I was listening to the song I shared and went into a hypnotic state and landed in the desert in Enoch the angel Michael was ordered to bind his brother Azazel with a chain in the desert who is specifially talking here I am unsure… sometimes I channel what I hear….but that it took you to such a beautiful place is wonderful perhaps to that place before the problems in the Garden thank you sweet lady ❤️
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Cool stuff, Brenda. I like the imagery that you pulled together. It has an almost looming presence overwatching it.
Great ideas you put together here.-
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hello dearest Styxian thank you for picking up the vibe of this write I don’t always like what comes through but am bound to write as I hear…this I believe in part to be Azazel talking thank you for your thoughts ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write with amazing imagery my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreA quiet morning,A cup of tea,A gentle breeze,And I am free. A birds sings,A lovely tree,A dog barks,And I am free. Somewhere in this quiet space,A monster hides away,Eat it must and so it does,Reveal its tortured face. The mind begins,The chatter...
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Okay, mon frere, my competitor, I see you have entered this Morning Coffee contest. Yours is lovely, then brutal, and in the end, bleak. Mine is cute, brutal, and in the end, funny. But mine has a secret ingredient: Coffee. Oh, I know, the rules say coffee OR tea are the liquids we honor — but MINE is COFFEE, and COFFEE is in the name of the contest, so I WIN! >THWEETT< (THAT'S A CARTOON inspired spitting action) So I win! hahahaHA! (that's a sarcastic laugh) Beside, Mine is about a cat and no one can tell a cat it's a loser and not be despised the rest of his life. Of course you can quit now (he said slyly) and save yourself the embarrassment of losing to a cat! (notice how I made the cat both powerful AND weak! How clever! Bonus points! Nice work though, BDB(P)
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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It’s fantastic, Brenda.