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Read MoreAuthor’s Note:Inspired by “The Call To Adventure”, by JoshBond. To me, the underlying message is to do freedom responsibly. For me, this involves a mindfulness of both the internal and the external. In this poem, Josh incorporates subtle, irregular...
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![Profile picture of Brandon Houser]()
The last line lands in a way that makes you want to reread this again, and let it linger. This caught my breath.
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hello dearest Brandon good morning thank you graciously I’m happy you like it ❤️
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This reads almost like an invocation, a chant of summoning. Much enjoyed this. As Brandon said, it invites rereading 🧡
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hello beautiful Willow thank you lovely one I appreciate you thoughts these just uncurrents of feeling rising ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write with dark undertones my friend. I concur with Willow and Brandon. Amazing read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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The goal changed and turned into something more quieter. Nice;)
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thanks
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I get this. Jumping alone leaves the mind just as isolated as being alone. If nobody sees, are you real? Do you matter? I so get this. That ending is softly powerful
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exactly. thank you
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, 253. Another excellent write with many layers my friend. I can relate.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thanks
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This is deep, and it quietly resonates. Great piece 253.
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appreciate it
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twofiftythree posted in the group National Poetry Month
almost
I was gonna jump
but I needed someone to watch
so I waited
and while waitin
the moment passed
and I forgot why I climbed
so I came back down
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Read MoreI’m waitingThink I got ghostedNot the patient typeNothin left to do however It’s a first for meI’m sure she has a reason Giving her the benefit of the doubt A Scorpio however We’re direct Don’t play gamesOn / Off babeWhat’s it gonna be ?
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There’s nothing fun about being ghosted. I’ve learned to move on if I sense any games being played. Detachment is a hard lever to pull, but is often necessary.
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Yeah Tim
Unexpected but maybe it was too good to be true …
Still got my high end recliner though …
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LOL They’re a necessity. 🙂
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Been there. Nice to see you back.
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Thanks A
Still some gas in my tank …
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Cool. <3
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hello dearest Poet there are better to come I’m happy to see you ❤️
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Yes Brenda
I agreeNice to see you too
Thanks
❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Passionately penned, Speak. I mean this is vintage you my friend. Nice to hear your wisdom on these things you’ve always got an interesting perspective on these matters. Great to see you back. Big Like.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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DUP ended and I lost my voice or my passion to write but tiptoeing back in the water again. We’ll see
Appreciate you D
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Ugh, being ghosted SUCKS.
You wrote this weeks ago and I’m only just seeing it because I step in here so infrequently… gosh it’s hard to find a substitute for DUP. There really is none.
Glad to see your works again, though.
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I really don’t like the format on this site but the DUP crowd is here so I step in occasionally. Yeah, being ghosted blows. We’ve since reconnected slightly but it’s not the same at the moment.
Thx Red
We need to talk more !!!Dig you
❤️🩹
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You had a full poem and you broke it up to have omitted pieces. Interesting concept