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“spent a few years
at the bottom
of a bottle
turns out
you can drown lota things
but demons fuckin float.”Penned with brutal honesty, 253. I concur with Fia. The stanza above has a lot of fucking bite, I can definitely relate to living in a bottle most of my life. Thanks for sharing your story. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This raw spill poem punches like a professional boxer. Each word is a bloodied and brawny fist, smashing its mark, square in the face. I absolutely concur with both, Fia, and Damian. Also, I do hope you see and realize the one and perhaps most important fact here: Your children do not fear you or cringe when you’re are near. You have effectively recreated the cycle of abuse. Thank you for sharing such a painful write.
Clay
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Willow wrote a new post
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hello beautiful Willow this has been on my mind of late I think we do come back with another chance at building on the wisdom we gained this round… very great write ❤️
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Brilliantly penned, Willow. This is a powerful write with lots of layers my friend. I’ve always thought that if one could come back they most likely wouldn’t remember their past life, so you might be getting a second chance but without any foresight of former lived experiences. Just a theory of mine. lol. I’m probably overthinking this aren’t I? Amazing read as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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My mind went sideways down a random path with this one, I think. I have to keep hope in place or this world will break me. It gives me hope to think that maybe the conscience becomes more pronounced on things we need to learn each time we return. I also hope (profoundly) that those resistant to the lesson come back as grubs. 😂 Thank you, my friend
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