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Read Moredeep I go and deeper stillcultivating sadness it shines inside of me why deny itsweet melancholy serenades in the shadowsquietly I play my melodymetiqulously I climb the notes into my black dintheir is cackling accompanied by whispersthe horde reside...
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️
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Thia is a deeply moving poem, Crimsin. I felt especially those last 3 line. And the music made the poem more real to me, more tragic. To desire death, yet condemned to life, where only sadness can be found. And yet, there is also the deeply felt desire to be “understood”. Crimsin, you may not want anyone in your “onyx tower”, but your poem calls to us nonetheless. Is this not an invitation to at least feel your words?
You write powerfully, Crimsin.
Curt
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hello dearest Curt of course it is I hope to move always that you got it makes me happy thank you ❤️
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Read MoreThis is your quick Sunday News We have started a new Forum called Collaboration. If you want to join and see if someone would like to collaborate with you that is the place to go. (Please try not to directly...
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It’s good to to be able to keep up with site developments, thanks again Fia .. Neville 😎👍
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Great info Fia. Thanks!
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Thanks, Fia. You keep us all well informed my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Very cool
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Read MoreThey're doing tricks on the blindAnd busy bee got controlThe other brick in the wallAnother day on the jobAnd that's the way things work Digging, shoving, to fuel the machineryWatch the pistons pumpThat's the drive that keeps the heart alive And...
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This has a rhythm to it that makes it feel like it belongs in a song. Nice
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Appreciate it that Fia. Thank you!
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Powerful and poignant.
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Thank you Thomas.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. I concur with Fia & Mary this has a lyrical feel my friend. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hello Damian. Thanks for the kind words.
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Thanks Mary. You kick ass!
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Cool. I’ll be waiting.
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A shadow-born whisper, the phrase itself feels like a seed of myth, half curse, half invocation, sprouting in the dark soil of secrecy. A living emblem of power and paradox… The serpent coils around the hidden flame, a covenant etched in shadows and bone, from silence it blooms, a forbidden crown.
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An absolutely lovely comment. Thanks PAR.
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Read MoreI love youI have no guide to help meNothing to protect me from your stormI felt like an idiot sitting in your carYour face was so beautifulI didn't think I can love anyoneI love youWouldn't it be great if...
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This is such a heartfelt plea. I felt this.
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Glad you enjoyed Fia. Thank you!
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Powerfully penned, Keith. I agree with Fia, this is a heartfelt plea, or a confession possibly. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for the comments!
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Read MoreMy childhood grocery storelooms legendaryIt had an enormous step on scalea dull light greenwith a long old-timey pointeraiming accusingly at oversizedtoo high numbersby 11 years oldscales were scaryMy childhood grocery store,Publix,had a big deli counterwe got some of our deli...
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Outstanding piece of writing Pinkdreams. I never walked into a Publix, since there not located in the NY tri-state area. Your memories and description of this store is unbelievable. The poem was done so well that as I began reading it, I knew and felt we were in the early to mid 70’s. The photo is also an extra bonus. As we get older, certain places and landmarks disappear. Our memories may fade a bit as well. At the same time, a certain item or smell may bring us back and reboot memories that were stuck somewhere in our brains decades ago. Nice work.
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VoI- Thank you so much for understanding, and for the nice praise. It means a lot to me.
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I enjoy poems or stories from people that can tap into their memories and write a compelling, nostalgic piece for that moment in time. You totally succeeded here.
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So good to hear from you. I think you did offer condolences back then, so thank you then and now.
Why did I think you lived in Texas? I’m so envious of those experiencing Fall and cold weather. 91 this afternoon in Phoenix. Stupid.
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian