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The background on this piece… I found Silk (writing site) very soon after I got married and moved to MS. Sam spotted me right away, and I had a handful of other friends in erotic literature. Everything came crashing down after the affair with Dan was discovered. I disappeared from SILK for many months, having no intention to return – not exactly a priority. After things settled between me and Andy, I wrote this poem and went back to SILK to post it. Naturally, the first person to see and comment was Sam.
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Wow, Now I am your first person to comment here.
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Wink!
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Yeah, I was in a low place when I wrote this. Things have turned around considerably. Thanks for checking it out, Adira!
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Just put a collar and leash on him. Leave the bed at home.
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You’re welcome
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Read MoreResting restlessly within the dark of its sheath,my poetic knife feels expressionless.When so, it wants to be drawnand plundered into the white of the page.Then it wants to cut through the emptinessand carve out beautiful metaphors.The blade will glint...
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Sinister. The metaphors cut like a sharp ass knife. Nice work!
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Haha like your apt feedback! Hahaha
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Read MoreJust speak to meand you’ll gaze into thewilderness behind my eyes.This wilderness,lush in dreams,barren realities!As I open the gate for you,I sit and listen white-knuckledto the voices within my mind.The further you trek in my mind,the closer to summery...
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Great detail. The suspense and direction this poem goes is alluring. Nice work!
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Nice slide rhyme and repetition…
Solid imagery in [pioneer’s compass]…
I had a new idea for implementation
of imagery…Do something like a Carlos Williams
Red Barrel…Like just insert in…
In a unique and strange way…
Or do such a thing at multiple
sites in the poem…Perhaps with multiple separate
images…
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I like how you open up with being together in the sky and the passion they have together is felt on the earth