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Read MoreJust speak to meand you’ll gaze into thewilderness behind my eyes.This wilderness,lush in dreams,barren realities!As I open the gate for you,I sit and listen white-knuckledto the voices within my mind.The further you trek in my mind,the closer to summery...
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Nice slide rhyme and repetition…
Solid imagery in [pioneer’s compass]…
I had a new idea for implementation
of imagery…Do something like a Carlos Williams
Red Barrel…Like just insert in…
In a unique and strange way…
Or do such a thing at multiple
sites in the poem…Perhaps with multiple separate
images…
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Read MoreHeaven can wait…Death a distant thunderstormwith lightning strikes far offannouncing its distant presence.Suicide is not the answer.I do not want to hurtthose that show compassion.So, I’ve decided Heaven can wait.
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This is awesome Daniel…
Such creative format…
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Will do! Haha
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Betty and
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Read MoreIf you can imagine for a moment a final exam in a university upper-level English course, picture about 12 students in a small room vigorously scribbling away, answering discussion questions for 90 minutes about authors and themes, each of...
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Engaging… really pulled me in…
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You’re awesome
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I’m so glad you liked it. Thanks for giving me a read!
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Thanks, HJ. It’s amazing I made it through school
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I’m glad you think so!
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Very well written and build up. I’m going to have to read more of your stories!
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I’m excited to hear that, Daniel. I guess I’ll have to put another one up for you.
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I think you should undress me more often.
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Great atmosphere. Wonderfully written and always so hot. Need a cold shower! XXX
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I’ll give you a warm one if you touch the right button…
Thanks for checking this, babe.
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Ice water, then a shower. You do this every time.
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Mind if I join you?
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I mean, is there any other kind of ambrosia? I’ve got your cream rinse right here, girl.
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Pass the tissues though I’m not crying.
Steamy peace.-
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Love that comment! You’re quick!
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Got two bee more carful with my wirds…I used peace insted of piece in my previous comment.
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Great detail. The suspense and direction this poem goes is alluring. Nice work!