This is truly beautiful, Damian.

What a sweet and seductive muse you have! A beautiful write, Damian!

This is beautiful. Very sigh worthy😊

excellent write

Dammit! I wish I could get the bookmark to work for me! Consider this one well & truly bookmarked! The muse is a sly creature…never know which road she’s gonna lead you down. But she always seems to do right by you, my friend

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Duende. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. They can be all that for sure. It just happens mine is pretty good at guiding the creative ship. Appreciate you.

Damian

Kind of feels like being married to a muse. A romance that sparks on pages. Great ink.

A lovely piece of writing Damian. Nice work.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. Glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is so sad. I feel this Daniel.

The words create a heaviness in this piece. Well said but filled with so much sorrow. Be well my friend.

Powerfully penned, Daniel. Can feel the sorrow and depth of this piece my friend. Great spill. Appreciate you.

Damian

The repeated phrases make such a punctuation point in this aching piece.

I think the idea of death is both scary and peaceful to me. To finally have that moment of nothing sounds good. But nothing also is terrifying as it is unknown. What is after nothing? But yeah, peace one day.

Amazing piece. DAMN Good Daniel. You’re a great storyteller!

Brilliantly penned, Daniel. Incredible storytelling my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Violent, dark, horrific. My kind of poem. Nice work Danial.

Powerfully penned, Daniel. A chilling write my friend. Nicely executed. Appreciate you.

Damian