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hello dearest John bittersweet is love in my view thank you for the love on this ❤️
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Never got to read your writing….just couldn’t get past the image of that stunning woman you provided….lol
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hello dearest Benny yes she is stunning I was looking for a more mature woman to go with the poem thank you for your response I spend a lot of time for the right images ❤️
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Lovely, Brenda. Better to let go sometimes. Lovely!
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thank you graciously dearest Daniel I never really let go though ❤️
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Read MoreI have fallen in love with her,and I cannot stop my feelings. A rose blooms in our bed,blooming from a rainy summer. A white petal had fallen onto the bedcover,I picked it up, smelled it,and rubbed it on her lips.She still...
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Loved this so much Daniel. Enchanting and artfully crafted. I was mesmerized as the scene unfolded through your words.
John
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Beautifully penned, Daniel. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This read for me as an emotional sensual journey with such poignancy at the end. Truly deeply felt poetry at its finest.
John
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Passionately penned, Daniel. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I felt the burning of this piece. Well done!
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Read MoreCandles within your eyes, illuming my shadow. Lonely in the dim I was, there is now a glow to follow.
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This short and I can’t help to say aww. This is sweet
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You know what I like about you, Daniel? You write and pour your heart out and couldn’t care less what others think or if you even get a nod or comment. You’re incredibly talented. Never stop being you.
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It’s how I’ve been living… pretty much in the shadow for a long time now. I refuse to analyze too many of other poet’s work and I don’t like there being too much rigid structure on writing. I write how I feel and in a fluid, bending structure that allows me to complete whatever piece I want the way I want it delivered to the world.
Thank you as always Alexandria,
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🕊️🌾🕊️
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Esoteric and beautiful. The image you painted here was filled with passion and beauty. Enjoyed this much.
John
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Read MoreA blanket of dust obscures our picture. Soft earth once your skin, now dusted with snow. This sheet had layered over months without warmth. However, we are soon to hold each other again. Then spring will dawn upon the rains of April and shower...
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Memories of spring. Nice Daniel
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Sorrowfully beautiful. Truly artistry in language that flows all the way until the end. You have a talent with words that is exquisite even in its sorrow. Fine art here, my friend.
John