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    Distracted on the way to the scene

      You sat on the couch, absorbed in something when I slithered onto your lap, wearing just a sundress. I wriggled around and plucked at your shirt, avoiding eye contact, and blushing a little. So, you knew. “You get cute when you’re...

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    • You are really good at short story writing. You caught the attention and kept raising the stakes. Oh man its good.

      • Thank you sweet Fia. Just stretching the fingers to see where they end … I appreciate you providing a venue for that exploration.

        Thanks again for the kind feedback!

    • Passionately penned, Betty. Amazing storytelling my friend. This write is also hotter than two demons fucking! lol. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Two demons fucking sounds pretty hot. (Are their wieners pronged like their tongues? WHAT?! OMG!)

        Hey friend, I also appreciate you. Rock on Damian.

      • Thank you my friend!

        • You’re truly welcome, Betty. I’m published 8x over on Amazon, and I can truly say there are 2 blends of sex and erotica out there: filthy dirty sweary red hot (check out My Pregnant Pause and Joely’s Swim LIVE here) and you write that brilliantly!!! Or there’s the subtler, less crude erotica – like my BEINGS – which sells more and got 5-star amazon reviews from women readers. Might be worth you experimenting? HJ Furl xx

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    the invitation

    tenderness vows to do no harmencourage a feeling and dance on the windssecretly craving your touchseduce the moment, I covetspeaking in tongues I whisper venomous versemeant to entice youmasochistic inclination, I think you like a commanding presencereverse the role,...

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    a little filth

    necromancer of filthreanimating the long deadcorrupt of visionshudder in understandingmy sexuality reaps your honestyyour need on the windsencite my lusts, they are of a wicked naturecunted truths for this culted groupieyou called the four corners and the woman of...

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    tremble

    fear is its namedreaded unease is more than a feelingyou feel it deep within youyour stomach tightensand the dark enters ina sacred vow to be one of their legionin the darkness keep, mixing with the shadowsshowing no fear lest...

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    a raven's prayer

    spellbinding in an aloof moodnot suited for others companysilently casting on the windchanting internallylet this song be hearda daisy of affectiona dash of hope to landprotection hinder not the way of loveinteresting asylum, enchanted hearts under a vowseeking redemption...

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