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    vigil

    sinister feeling comes at night while sleepingmy soul lay witness to an unbecoming vigildreaded need has a taste for methere is no seduction this is rapea spirit manipulating my mind while dreamingan orgasm forced from meit felt so good...

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    exist

    interacting with devils you can feel itthe peril of fright... deafeningsuccumbing to this feeling dangerouskeep your head, move one foot in front of the othervindictive snickering, and yes they are laughingit is their way of speach...sarcasmof a fierce nature...

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    The Massage Therapist - Alayna (Part Two)

    Continued… Alayna came back. She was to be my first appointment that morning and throughout the night before at home in bed, I thought about her. All of her. Her feel, her taste, and that spark of a crush. A...

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    wane

    dreadful need in the crevices of the soul, cravewith an ache so great as to make me bleedMidnight approaches and brings with him shadows that covetamong the faces I see youpeering deeply into my eyesconnecting with the witch withinVulnerability...

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    The Massage Therapist - Alayna

    I had always heard, mainly from my two older brothers, that one should never get married. Be a player and own your freedom. These words echo still as I have no children and no ex-wife—my own life and liberty....

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    • I love the build-up, the initial nervousness on Alayna’s part, her relaxation, increasing confidence, their red hot sex! This has to be one of the best real life erotic stories, I’ve read anywhere, Daniel other than my own, of course! I’m thrilled for you, very well done indeed! More, please, mister! Harriet-Jacqui xx

      • More indeed! The build-up is essential in erotica – anticipation heightens the pleasure! And thank you for the kind words. I’m going to be focusing on erotica for a while now as I enjoy writing it.

        • I agree about build-up, Daniel, but don’t make it too interminably long like some writers on Inkitt – readers like me will soon get bored and lose interest. That’s why I’m successfully writing flash fiction now – quick thrills for all + instant reaction = fun! fun! fun! xx

    • Tomorrow?? We have to wait till tomorrow. This is good, Daniel.

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