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Read Moreis meant to undolike skin peeling away from time,like a name dissolving in the mouth. not to be readthe instant the gaze tries to fix it,but fails—gloriously. before it undoes itself, it is already noise,it is already absence,it is already the...
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Damian!!! Thanks.
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Paulo!! How are you? Marvelous piece of writing. Your poetry always keep me thinking & wondering, while I balance on the edge of my mind.
Peace!
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Insanity!!! Thanks.
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The ending is a rock through a window! No peaceful moment within this write. It has an edge throughout. Impactful.
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Styxian!!! Thanks.
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Read MoreF𝔯𝔞𝔤𝔯𝔞𝔫𝔠𝔢 𝔬𝔣 𝔡𝔲𝔰𝔱 𝔤𝔬𝔫𝔢 𝔰𝔬𝔲𝔱𝔥, 𝔞 𝔰𝔠𝔢𝔫𝔱 𝔬𝔣 𝔩𝔞𝔫𝔤𝔲𝔦𝔡 𝔡𝔢𝔠𝔞𝔶, 𝔞 𝔯𝔢𝔰𝔦𝔡𝔲𝔢 𝔬𝔣 𝔰𝔲𝔪𝔪𝔢𝔯 𝔬𝔫 𝔱𝔥𝔢 𝔟𝔯𝔢𝔞𝔱𝔥 𝔬𝔣 𝔱𝔥𝔢 𝔩𝔬𝔰𝔱.ℑ𝔱 𝔥𝔞𝔫𝔤𝔰 𝔦𝔫 𝔱𝔥𝔢 𝔥𝔲𝔪𝔦𝔡 𝔥𝔢𝔞𝔱 𝔩𝔦𝔨𝔢 𝔞 𝔥𝔞𝔩𝔣-𝔣𝔬𝔯𝔤𝔬𝔱𝔱𝔢𝔫 𝔤𝔥𝔬𝔰𝔱, 𝔦𝔰 𝔱𝔥𝔢 𝔪𝔢𝔪𝔬𝔯𝔶 𝔬𝔣 𝔪𝔞𝔤𝔫𝔬𝔩𝔦𝔞𝔰 𝔴𝔦𝔱𝔥𝔢𝔯𝔢𝔡 𝔱𝔬 𝔤𝔯𝔞𝔶.𝔗𝔥𝔦𝔰 𝔥𝔞𝔲𝔫𝔱𝔦𝔫𝔤 𝔭𝔢𝔯𝔣𝔲𝔪𝔢...
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Okay, I am stuck with this, but I am trying.
Was born with eyes wide open
To be prepared for the truth
No one seemed to care or wanted to offend
What had happened on the roofTime withholds memories in a box
We crawl, then stand, and eventually walk
As a rusty key enters an unforgiving lock
Uttering words before learning to talk6 Comments-
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Fia, you really need to study the lesson more thoroughly for a complete understanding.
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I am going to. By next week it should be better.
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I hope so … the topic is very interesting, if you can get it into proper Sonnet format. : )
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I’m trying
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For examples, you might read and study some of my posted sonnets, applying what you’ve learned from the lesson to become a bit more familiar with the Sonnet format … you should have it down by next week’s session. It doesn’t have to be perfect, just show a basic understanding we can build on.
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okay
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Read MoreMidsummer season on my wintry lips, these modern symptoms from antiquated sorrows. The sunlight of acceptance, and midnight of isolation. Youthful blushes and the wrinkles of experience, I have the free will to question my fate. This wealth of imagination, and the poverty of my reality. The...
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Your imagination is a beautiful flowering garden, you are a wealthy man, dear Daniel! Your wording is awesome. You are a master in using the stylistic device of contrasts!
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Daniel this is sublime in its dark vision. You have so much to say in your poem here and I for one am really liking what you wrote. Though dark it has a flow that is mesmerizing.
John
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Read MoreThere is a crack in my mind and everything flows into it. My head floods with such intensity, I drown in my own little world. I look through my eyes, nothing is what it seems. Blinded I am from the truth. Lost... oh, so lost! Where...
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Powerful, insightful and honest.
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This just flows and sings the song of darkness in an engaging way. I could feel your words deep in my marrow.
John
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Brilliantly penned, PAR. Excellent write per usual my friend. Always a pleasure to read your work my brother. Appreciate you.
Damian