Thanks for the update, Fia. Appreciate you cuz.

Damian

Very nicely done. The rhymes are tight. The story is well structured as well.
Great result here.

Beautifully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.

Damian

Your pen has power, Naajir. You weld it like a trident of discourse. Because you see that discourse and use it against itself.
Always well spoken with a keen wisdom.

Powerfully penned, Naaj. Excellent write my friend. This has a flow that would make great song lyrics. Nicely done per usual brother. Appreciate you.

Damian

We read this thinking of all the people now wanting to claim innocence, The supporters of Nero and Caligua who supported the emperor even after discovering their madness. The mad rulers campaign on their sickness and still found themselves in power. There is no depth to the madness, you lose yourself using the normal routes to navigate. Tight

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

One of my favorites by you. Excellent writing, Crimsin.

Your writing always puts a spell on me. Great work Brenda. xo

Magically written, dear Crimsin. Your words are powerful and enchanting!

It makes you think if they have someone to love on them would they end up that way

Thanks for reading. The system creates problems.
Regards