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    Misreading the signs.

    i picked herlike a novelthe cover waseye catchingexquisitei would startto read her in depthbut not finishso i'd start again laterthen againthen againwe marriedand i discoveredi should have finishedor at leastread the plotor table of contentsi had no ideawhat i...

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    • Hahah You needed Cliff Notes to read the book. This is good.;))

    • Book covers are meant to draw you in even if the book itself is rubbish.
      I used to plough through books even if they were rubbish….not now.I give them about two chapters.If they haven’t got me by then,it’s arrivederci.
      Our partners should be treated the same….lol

    • I have three books I would like to return. Is that possible.
      I must have missed something in those synopses.
      j.

      • That’s a lot of money spent, J. 🙂 They must have been horror books. lol thanks.

    • Reading has its dangers lol. Can’t help feeling this poem is going to be relatable to many. Made me smile you did Tim.

      Chris

    • Clever, funny, and painfully relatable – This is the kind of truth you laugh at because it hurts a little. haha
      The final line is brilliant.

    • So you didn’t read any articles, you just looked at the pictures…LOL

    • Cleverly penned, Tim. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • So true! A 20 yr old boy at my local market goes on and on about the girl he is going to marry. They met on the Internet a few months ago and met up in person twice. You can’t suggest he slow down. So often, we think we know it all. I was going to be happy when I escaped my .
      mother’s home. First hubby was as violent and crazy as her.

      • I really appreciate your comment, Paula. I assumed you didn’t like anything I wrote. 🙂
        Yes, some guys are too lost in the fantasy world to see what’s really there. Life will splash some cold water in their face when it’s too late.

        Sorry about your hubby and mom. I know it’s hard to get over that or forget. My mother was an alcoholic. I’ve had some horror in my life to.

    • I love this. I never read in depth the outline of the or their stories either. A great metaphor you gave loved it 😍

    • Superb work, my friend.

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    Dangerous Advice from a Poet Playing a Doctor

    Dangerous Advice from a Poet Playing a Doctor   freckles are little poems on the face of literature they frolic about cute? doubtful blemishes? not really   and on the nose of inspiration they look good but the melanoma words that mix themselves in may be cancerous   so perhaps stick to short stories they may present less...

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    • Kind of an ironic ending. I sense a kind of lightheartedness in this. Nice one, J.

    • A cancer among the freckles…now that is an interesting take. As a poet, you are saying they heal..Are short story writers considered a placebo?
      Being that I write both, would I be considered a test subject? Hmm
      I like this.

      • Your reply made me smile. Thank you, Fia.
        j.

        • I’m glad I can be goofy sometimes.

          • And by the way….I envy those who can write Short Stories….I do not have the attention span. Started four different novels…got through 40, 60, 40 and 60 pages in each and lost my momentum.
            But then our current person in charge of health would just ignore the freckle as nothing to worry about or a Democratic hoax.
            j.

    • This poem is so clever and darkly funny. The metaphors are brilliant, especially the idea of freckles as little poems and “melanoma words” as a threat. It makes the piece feel both whimsical and sharp, a tone perfectly captured by its fantastic title, “Dangerous Advice from a Poet Playing a Doctor.” Great Write, j.

    • Brilliant work, my friend.

    • hmmm let’s see, I don’t write short stories, I don’t have freckles, so all I can do is read your poem Jacob. And if you don’t mind my saying, it’s one fukin’ freckley good poem. The kind of freckle poem that gets under the skin of those who think they know art but understand nothing at all. Why do such people run our society, create cultural wars, and are a menace to humanity?!

      So here goes a reading: once upon a time in Frecklesville….. LOL
      -Curt

    • Powerfully penned, Jacob. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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