Brilliantly penned, Thomas. A very powerful write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks

I feel this.
A very moving piece.
Regards James

Thank you.

Powerfully penned, Thomas. An incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you. Appreciate it.

Thanks for reading.
There may be more to come. Memories are funny things. There is much more I could write. When the mood is right. This is a series I am thinking of making. I have a novella I need to finish first. I am thankful for you kind words.
Regards
James

Hi,
I”ll give you the run down. Currently I have
a series of scifi novellas, one short novel, all from the same series. I’ll send you the links if you like no worries if not.
Regards
James

From the first line to the last, I was caught up in this

Brilliantly penned, Thomas. This is an incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Outstanding poem Thomas. Love it!!

Thank you.

Thank you.

I love the vague references and allusions, the metaphorical array of madness and symbolism. You can certainly feel the missteps and empathize with the devastation. As with all good poetry, I can read this in several different ways.

It’s a piece that keeps calling you back, Thomas… like a final glance behind you at a beautiful woman passing by.

Thank you. I appreciate it.

This is a truly seductive write. enjoyed this.

You’re going to seduce all the women on this site if you keep it up, Richard. What the hell are you going to do with all of us? We can’t all fit in your fucking shower.

I love a man who can write a Sonnet.

Oh-MY, right back at you, Sweet Adira!🤗

What better for a hopeful Bard than to receive the glowingly sensual approval of such a lusty femme fatale? This, I cannot answer. ; )

Aw, give those guys a chance … they feel the same, I’m sure, with You there to compel their fervorous blood to flow … even if the caresses of their words might not as vibrantly kiss your yearnings’ ache.

Ohhh-YES, Dear Poetess, repeats are always warmly welcome! ⁓ Rascal🖌