Beautifully penned, DK. Incredible storytelling again my friend. Your wit and charm add a sense of authenticity to Meg’s personality. Outstanding work my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Wow!! That’s quite some buildup.

Kisses

Just like in a movie, where they play a throwback montage, and yours works perfectly in gifting Andy’s and Meg’s relationship a clearer sense of familiarity as a couple, how their romantically sexual life and love for one another began and progressed … simply brilliant, imaginative, and amazingly creative writing, Megan.💥

Then, your actors’ sensual, vividly erotic diction and true to life jargon lend a uniquely vivid genuineness to their characters and situations, making it all such an amazingly enjoyable read for your fans.

I have no further critique, except to bow again in sincere admiration and respectful envy of your enormous skill with a pen.
Thank you ever-so warmly and gratefully, Our Elegantly Blessed Authoress, for sharing You! ⁓ Richard🖌

Passionately penned, DK. Really good dialogue my friend, and it’s use of telling a story through their interactions. Of course you always bring the heat with your erotica. Fantastic chapter. Appreciate you.

Damian

Na… it’s a free offering and catharsis. I’m glad you like it!
xoxo

Superb work, you dirty girl. You need spanked. lol

Damn YOU!

You’ve stripped me of my resolve to resist being jealous of another writer’s skills, fundamentally allocating myself to second rate status … still, honesty is honesty, and all I can honestly admit is how I now yearn to write as skillfully as You! C’est la vie!

Okay, Lady, I’m addicted! Why deny it, when it’s so obvious by this recurring, throbbing bulge, labored breath, and repeated trips to lower the thermostat setting?

Hm? I can’t even begin to guess what’s next … well, I’ll just have to try and catch a few winks of sleep between now ‘n then!
“Til next time, your smitten fan! ⁓ Rascal🖌

BTW: Love the photos throughout!

First word and first reaction. Jesus.
I do not say that often, but you made me say it so many times that I may have to go to church. What a chapter.

Passionately penned, DK. You definitely know your way around adjectives my friend. Very descriptive indeed, the flashback with the events of the wedding, was a nice contrast to the festivities. Deep undertones my friend, incredible storytelling. Appreciate you.

Damian

Wow. You nailed this one.

Yeah, I can definitely see this in Barnes and Noble. I’m glad you like it, though! Thanks for following me on this.

xoxo

Ohhh, goodness-ME!

How can I adequately explain how fully I’ve enjoyed the foreplay, and every single succulently filling bit between Dan’s ‘n Meg’s actual consummation, and ummm-HMMM, what a magnificently sublime consummational array of endlessly various climaxes it was … WHEWWWEE!

Excuse me, please, Ma’am, while I turn up the oxygen supply!
Onward, UPward! ⁓ Rascal🖌

Outstanding storytelling, DK. This is just incredible detail, like you definitely pull from life experience, about fishing you can tell you know what you’re talking about. Like I said before you have much depth in your seductive tales. Excellent work. Appreciate you.

Damian

I’m so glad that you’re glad!
Actually, this is my first attempt at a series or book on this site. I thought that I had started it, but I was mistaken. Then, I found out I could not incorporate my previous post into a series. So, I reposted the chapter and added. Do you think I should take the first one down? I hated to lose the comments, but it’s repetitive.

Yeah. Fuck it. That’s my mantra.

Are you having an orgasm over there, Keith? I fucking hope so. Just aim it away from the keyboard.

xoxo

Oh, well in that case you can cum all over it.
xoxo

Glorious, DK, simply spellbinding!

I find it amazingly brilliant how you so easily keep me so arousingly enthralled in your living, breathing, mental, emotional, psychological, almost hypnotic, erotically engaging spell.

Lucky us this is an ongoing series!
Thank you ever-so warmly, Our Incomparable Master Authoress! ⁓ Richard🖌

This anthology is super arousing. I love the attention to detail.