I love the lyrics. Damian, cool piece

Thanks so much for reading and listening, as well as your kind words, Adira. That’s what I was afraid of that people would want more, I’m kidding. lol. I was just trying to remember the melody, I knew my voice isn’t great. But I still now the melody, so it all worked out in the end. Appreciate you.

Damian

Sorry it didn’t play. It’s an acoustic song, maybe Bob Dylan/Neil Young, kinda style. I’m glad you enjoyed the lyrics my friend. Means a lot to me. Appreciate you.

Damian

I couldn’t get the audio to play but I really like the lyrics. As usual, you don’t skate across the surface. You take us deeper than many do. My daughter keeps telling me songs are just poetry with a tune. Not sure where that drops me…I always hear my poetry with a tune. Nicely done, my friend

Sorry it didn’t play. I’m looking into it. I couldn’t get it to play on QuickTime when I was messing with it, but it played over here. I’m glad you love the lyrics, I wanted you to hear it to. Appreciate you, Duende.

Damian

Hello Damian. The lyrics are wonderful. I couldn’t get the audio to play. Nevertheless, I’m sure your voice kicked ass. Nice work here.

Witty, silly and naughty! Lol

I loved this. Very witty indeed and great flow.
Thank you for sharing.

Loved it. The reason I read good,creative poetry that makes me smile 😃

We’re going to start with a banana and move to the whipped cream.