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Read MoreIn hush of sheets, she burns serene— a quiet pyre 'neath storm-kissed skin, arms arched high, wrists framed soft, surrendering to flames within. Breasts rise defiant altars, nipples crowns of roseate fire, pebbled tight with whispered want, aching for the tongue's desire. Rain of need traces rivulets down...
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Read MoreP=Romeo, what makes you so sad? R=My emotions are my own why do you ask? P=I hoped life was treating you kinder than it did before R=Before when? When my love walked out the door. P=Why not open your heart for someone new....
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Cleverly penned, Fia. Excellent write as always my friend. Dig the Shakespeare vibe, also I’ve always thought you’re amazing at writing dialogue. Nicely done. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Cuz:))
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nice, I like this… you should develop this into a Series (play)
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Thank you Sam. Really a play? Maybe lol
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I love this, Fia. Dito, Sam.
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Thank you Kay-1
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I like new concept poetry & love the fact it is possible to listen to the words although I note this is not your voice Fia .. still it kind of fits with my idea of Romeo’s voice ..
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Thank you Neville. I was sitting here thinking of how he would sound and feel if things were different. I may try my hand at writing a play, but I want his voice to stay true to the original. It’s a thought.
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All is lost for poor Romeo and he’s doomed to a lonely darkness, then… the clouds break, the sun shines again, and all is well. I love happy endings. Hopefully, it will last.
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It’s bright and sunny for Romeo because Juliet’s back huh? lol Thank you Sam;)
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Read MoreI killed a rat not happy about that,but what other choice did I have?It wouldn't just leave of its own accord.It had found a nice cosy place in my home,a place to set up house and breed.I'm sorry your life...
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It does feel awful to kill a living animal but they are dangerous and they steal food. I hope your okay.
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Thanks Fia for reading.
I really just wanted it to leave but rats arent inclined to do that.Im ok with it now but I still wasn’t thrilled about killing it.
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D. Ignatov and
Jim River are now friends
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Read MoreLook how far you both came, destined to be together. They doubted your strength, tried to tear you apart. But you remained steadfast, standing your ground. Through trials and tribulations, You fought and conquered. No longer separated by distance, bound by the power of your love. And it will...
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What a beautifully written gift to your brother and his fiancée!!
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Thank you 😊
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Smokin’ hot poem!! ❤️🔥