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Read MoreWe murder ourselves everyday with our own ignorance. We suffer through our own ignorance. Ignorance of the absolute truth, not the subjective truth, the absolute truth that everything in the present moment is ' the way it is'.....not right nor wrong,...
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Whatever you want from the other side of the earth
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Cleverly penned, Peter. Incredible write my friend, great first line by the way. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreFor years, I didn't speak to my father, that us, until today. He had news for me. Today, I drove in trepidation to his house, my childhood home, to find answers. Up the old driveway, seeing changes, more vegetation and tall grass, nothing trimmed nor...
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Powerful work. You bring this to life.
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Thanks Thomas. I could have written so much more on this.
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That’s a super deep piece, Daniel. I can see how the trip was an inspiration on so many levels.
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Meg, it was so challenging the trip there. You have no idea. Wiping the dust off of my old things and taking some. See him so different and frail now. My mom was the glue that kept our family together, now, like sticks in the wind my family. 😢
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Brilliantly penned, Daniel. This is a tremendous write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Much respect
Naaj
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Congrats on your award for this piece, Daniel. It was well deserved.
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Thanks, Meg.
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Read MoreAI Summary Analysis of Part One: What a striking, immersive vision of a shattered world where tenderness and cruelty dance in the same desolate spaces. Your narrative plunges us into a post-apocalyptic America that is as haunting as it is...
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Yeah, I like to wake up with a shaft inside me… but not one of these.
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Stellar writing…
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I’m glad you like it, Drieks! Your comments are awesome! Thanks for reading.
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You make me smile!
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Powerful work. Vivid and sharp.
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Thanks, Thomas! Glad you liked it.
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Brilliantly penned, DK. You’ve got mad skills my friend, with the pen of course. Clarification is important sometimes. lol. Incredible write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I’m so glad you think my skills are ‘mad’, Damian. No clarification necessary! Thanks for reading and following me!
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Mmmm…the gift and the curse maybe?
This vibe was very imaginative!!
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Glad you think so, Naaj – definitely a curse. I appreciate you reading!
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Oh shit…
Thanks for telling me.
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Idk how this poem slipped out of my radar, but I am glad to catch up and “hunt” few of your poems.
They say a good writing is a writing which makes you feel the want to fuck, destroy and create something all at once. I guess I am having that feeling again!
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I’ve never heard that before, but I’m glad to bring you there!
I like the concept of being ‘hunted’ because it metaphorically represents what happens all the time in reality. The tricky part, from a girl’s perspective, is getting the right person to hunt you and avoiding the wrong ‘predator’.Thanks for reading!
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Read MoreFunny how I never do understandhow I am just... a generic brand—nothing special here to seewhen I again reveal the real me. Just a poet with a true poem,condemned to simply roamacross a vast blizzarded pagein a quest for some...
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I’m so in awe (jealous) of your flow…
Thank you for sharing!
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Thanks so much… sometimes it works…
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This poem itself is wildfire, S. Yes, reveal the real you.. more and more in your work! Another great read…
Daniel
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WHO has ever heard of a generic dragon? Just wow. I don’t think so.
I love this piece, though. You elaborate the exhausting discouragement of inherent transparency to the point of being invisible. We’re all just another ant on the hill… until we drag home that rubber tree plant. Or, you can just blow fire! It worked for Godzilla.You’re no more generic than a Ferrari. Give me a ride.
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Superb work. Powerful.
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Life of a writer, LDF. Powerful my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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“Repeat after me… Repeat after me…”
Okay, I admit it. You’ve totally hypnotized me.
Now what are you going to do?