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Read MoreThe moment the holy water sizzled on my flesh, I knewthat I was destined for flames. The priest saw it, frownedand no longer called me, "son."He walked on by, never to bless me again. The moment I died, I ascended.Below me...
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hello dearest Daniel I fear I will be judged for my delusions I think I will go to hell this is uplifting way to look at things 💕
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I believe I’m going to hell too. We can’t decide when, but we can decide how we meet that end. Love this life the fullest and to any good God that should count for something. I’ll stay strong if you stay strong, Brenda.
Daniel
Gothic-Surrealist
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thank you Daniel hugs 💕
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Read MoreI feel your presence I'm not scaredyou know me wellmy soul is bared You've been beforethree times indeedyou thoughtI'd be an easy feed Nearly had mebroken shattered I decided life's what mattered You visit mewhen tired and stressed but can't have meI'm...
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hello Benny I love this perspective on depression I never thought of it as a positive but you’re right when settles over us we have to stop and take inventory great write 💕
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Read MoreWith each shallowing pulse,my heart bleeds on.With each beat,my heart hollows. With each weakening push of blood through my veins,my heart bleeds on,and my limbs turn cold and deathlike. With each beating of my drum silencing,you can no longer press your...
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Death and passion rolled up in one. The repetition of the heart beating makes it more powerful.
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Sounds like something Type O Negative could put music too. If Peter Steele was still with us. Nicely done, Daniel. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreThe first time we metYou were dyingI was going to help youI can’t helpbecause you did not want to be savedwe shared a joint on your back porchash droppin between my chuckswatchin the way you sank into silencelike it...
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A well written piece!
Did you use stream of consciouness, Fia-in-collab-mood? HeheheGood job both of you! “)
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Thank you so much, M.E. Actually, no, the idea came to me, and Ambjr was kind enough to see what he could do with it.;))
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Great job…..
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Thank you, Peter;)) I may be heading your way. Hmmm
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I always wonder who’s face that is when I look in the mirror… nice collaboration
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Hmm a mysterious twin lol…..Thank you, Sam;))
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Brilliantly penned, Fia & Ambjr. Into the book it belongs! It’s not easy for a collaboration to make my book. But this was seamless, incredible collab you two. Appreciate you, both.
Damian
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We made it into the book? Yes, yes, yes. Thank you, Damian<3
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This is such a well blended collaboration. And just real and raw. As good as it gets.
Great job you two.
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Thank you, Nick;)) Appreciate that
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian