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Read MoreAre we gazing into the mere moments we have left? Not into each other's eyes, rather into the only time we have left? Rather than moments, let's gaze on into many years ahead! When we’re old and still in-love…
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Read MoreGhetto Lions Her lover man, drunk on romance,is led by her down skid row.He is a sad-eyed prophet of gloomwho topples imaginary kingdomsin his game of emotional chess.He never quite captures the king. He hugs her, his angel of midnight dreams.His...
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Intriguing write, John. This piece has layers and lots of depth my friend. Amazing imagery and storytelling. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian, I am most grateful for your seeing into the layers within this piece. And also very grateful for your appreciation of the imagery and storytelling in my poem. I appreciate you too, very much.
John
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Tremendous work. Powerful and vivid. Excellent.
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Thank you so much Thomas. Very much appreciated your observations on my poem. Very grateful.
John
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This is so worth reading. The grittiness and inner searching, as well as a lonely desire dresses this up nice. I get a real California children of the night feel to this. So well done. Great poem.
Did you mean as he combs her golden tresses?
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Thank you so much Tim. You did see into the heart of my poem with a keen insight into its meaning. Love your words here. You have brought joy into my night. And yes I did indeed meaning he combs. Thank you so much for pointing that out. You really helped a lot with that. Have a great night.
John
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Read MoreWriting all my fears on an empty page Needing to share these random thoughts Looking for common ground to engage Never found it hard to connect the dots Chasing dreams in a game of chance I’m a realist when it comes to limitations Sure it...
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I liked this, Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adagio. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Oh, so totally resonates. I don’t know where I would be without my proverbial pen. And I spent far too many years perched in neutral…only to discover there is no such thing. Either your ass is leaning in one direction or your nose is. I prefer staying informed & walking the path that suits me. Shadows & all. And i find like souls along the way when living authentic. Consider this one on my reading list with emphasis, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I wasn’t in neutral, but my wheels were always spinning. Either wound up in the ditch of life, or lost on an alcohol induced detour. Nowadays I’m living authentic as well, there’s shadows down every path I’ve found. Being aware and informed allows one to read the situation better. Thanks for the list.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Agreed, there is always more to the story. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That’s beautifully reflective—wisdom framed not as some lofty concept, but as lived experience layered over time. The imagery of seasons and fences evokes quiet contemplation, hesitation, even resilience. That last line? A soft unraveling of illusion. It reads like a quiet reckoning.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, PAR. So glad you connected with the write my friend. You’re spot on. I believe wisdom is acquired through time and experience. Always enjoy your commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Superb work. Powerful.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreSummer is gone, I’m afraid.And so are the remnants of you. That part isn’t such a loss though,because you broke my heart in two. How I long for the days of normalcy..And just maybe I can get back to thatNow that...
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Mic Drop!
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You’re too kind, Damian.
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Ouch…… someone done you wrong.
Good write and after summer comes autumn,winter and spring….don’t be duped when a new summer arrives.
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Fool me once, shame on you 😏
Thank you Peter❤️
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I like to think so too ☺️ as always Adira, I appreciate your kind words.
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Yes, this summer is new you and your strength cannot be denied. Love this piece you put out.
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Next time around it’s your turn to retaliate. Take names and kick ass! Amazing poetry PG.
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Read MoreA haunting beauty you are moonlit, mortality still flowing with passion. A haunting romanticism our shared lips are, bathing together in crimson moonlight. Your kiss lingers well beyond death, and beyond our last cold moment. And there's a dominance in your kiss... Hopefully not eternal...
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And there’s a dominance in your kiss…
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I love the gothic style here.
Very powerful and I envy such a beauty…haunting.
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. An intriguing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Beautifully penned, Daniel. Into the book it belongs! Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian