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    The Great Exodus

    The man's face is leather-like,as time-worn as his stained overallsfrom years of farming. His degraded truck's radiatoris starving for water. He unscrews the radiator capwith callused hands andgrabs a thin handle to ared metal bucket struggling not to spill a...

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    • My dad had to work two jobs as a kid during the depression because his dad had died and he had to support his mom.
      This is intense but also beautiful lyrically.
      Reminds me of the film The Grapes of Wrath.

      The Joad family…”I’ll be there Ma, yeah, I’ll be there!”

      • That’s where the idea came from. I read the book many years ago. Your dad was a courageous person. No wonder why you turned out so well. Thanks for the comment, J.

    • I liked how you discussed this. Looking through one person’s point of view and I could see it.

    • Powerfully penned, Tim. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    Mother's Hushed Eyes

    Passages of my childhood arise within my mother’s death gaze, bringing reminiscences of olden days. In childhood, we would speak in silent gaze. No mother left to envision me now, now within those quiet eyes. You have gone away oh, dear mother, let the...

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    • My goodness, this hit me in the gut. My mother passed 8 years ago. But I still sense her keeping an eye on me from above…so I must weigh my decisions carefully.
      very relatable write.
      j.

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    A leaf,slowly quietly fell.Was it orange or red?I couldn't tell. Perhaps it was a leaf in a fairytale.As it watched the protagonist grow.And other leaves begin to fall. Personalities begin to grow.As the leaves slowly fell.There is a story everyone tell. Of...

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    • The life of a leaf. Wonderful personification in this, and nice analogy for how life is for a human…except the only tree we fall off of is our family tree…..At times, I got pushed off of mine….but somehow this leaf got off the ground and found another spot in the tree.
      j.

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    Ripe

    No answers - yet.  Am waiting for Rodge the postie to arrive.  Good - clock's ticking into the day - hooray!  Just grabbed the glass milk bottle from the doorstep. Can see the milkie's oops a daisy slip!  (can...

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