WOW! This poem sizzles right before my eyes. I have a boat ready to sail. Let’s do this! xox

Oooo man that ending. That was good. I enjoyed how you took us into the contemplation of the act.

Some folks have all the fun but there is always a price to pay.
Great arrousing write.💋

Passionately penned, PG. Excellent write my friend your imagery is precise and alive. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

Chère P.G.,
The boat is the cherry on the cake.
Love your write!
I’ll be back for an eyeful of beauty!
Kind regards, Gus

You can always create something steamy Lady, great imagery

Simple pleasures, and small feats. Great write Peter. xx

Beautifully penned, Peter. It’s the little things. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks Damian and PG….it’s a long day without a cup of tea, so get in early.No.matter what my mood a piping hot cuppa moves it for a while.
I guess so does bourbon but not at six on the morning.

Hoi hoi Peter,
That’s a qualitea poem. Hats off.
Love it a lot. Leave it up to me to murder your language.

If you are American: Thank you!
In all other cases: keep ‘em coming, please.

Kind regards, Gus

Truthfully penned, PG. An honest and open write my friend. I can relate, this was powerfully precise and authentic. Excellent write. Appreciate you.

Damian

Wow! My gosh, this is an amazing write, it’s humanism going sideways, written with clarity.

DAMN! This piece is in your face and Hardcore! No apologies written here. Enter at your own risk! Love it PG..xox