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Read MoreThere's a big old steel gate around her graveThough It makes no difference - crypt or cave'Cause clocks won't tell the time of dayTo those that sleep in dirt or clay. It's dark - it's deep - what's small will...
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Interesting comment, Crimsin. Thank you.
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I’m digging dark Tim!
These two stanzas build quite the image and feeling.
Truly enjoyed this other side of your writing:)-
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Thanks very much, Adelly. Much appreciated. 🙂
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Well this is interesting! I love the tie in with her as the subject header. It’s a tight rhyme scheme, very clever.
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I appreciate your comment, Styx. Thank you.
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Cleverly penned, Tim. Excellent write with amazing flow my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you my friend. 🙂
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Willow posted in the group National Poetry Month
Heave Silence
words recede
when darkness settles
and sound is heard only at the edges
muffled though they be…
silent sobs and absolute grief
louder in my senses
than gunshots and shouts of jubilation
because we all know where hate takes us
but only some will see it
guess it’s only visible…
from the barrel end of a gun
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It sounds like moment of redemption. The darkness seems to have control it all.
It talks about gunshots, shouts of jubilation over hate, and staying “triggered.” It’s that “eye for an eye” energy where the fight never ends because everyone is “just warming up” to hurt each other back.
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The only way to fight hate is with love and compassion. Standing together in the face of adversity and having each other’s back.
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Yes exactly… With love always to defeat against the darkness that will not win. Good write keep it up .
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Read Morewords recede when darkness settles and sound is heard only at the edges muffled though they be... silent sobs and absolute grief louder in my senses than gunshots and shouts of jubilation because we all know where hate takes us but only some will see it guess it's...
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The title sums it up. We all know where hate takes us. We do and some try their best to stay away from it and others well…
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Others seem to relish it. Does make me wonder what deficit is within them that they think they need to fill it with hate. Thank you, Fia 😊
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Mic Drop!
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Thank you, my friend 😊
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Daddy taught me how to shoot because he said it was important to know how to protect myself if I ever needed to. He also said the first thing I needed to know was that if I’m not going to be able to use it, it will be used against me so I should probably never get one. I’ve stuck by that philosophy since that day. Thank you, Brenda 🧡
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Damian DeadLove and
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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
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Read MoreCan’t go back to the way it was before The storm stripped the foundation bare Dirty secrets are used in keeping score Greedy pigs feast at the root of despair So many sleepless nights I’ve lost count Growing sick of seeing your fucking face An...
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I echo your thoughts Damian. I mentioned to a friend the other day that everything is corrupt now – Companies…people in business…the government…car dealers…you name it. It’s like we’ve gotten to a point where scamming people is the norm now. Great write my friend.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That it is, everything is about turning a buck, with doing as little as possible. What’s saddest is it doesn’t bring them any happiness. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Oh you know I’m over here furiously nodding and grabbing logs for the fire. I have come to the place of having to mute and cover the face of the colostomy bag. It’s not worth the heart palpitations and anger rising. I refuse to allow my health to be further deteriorated by that overstuffed cheese puff. Another marshmallow, my friend? I’m adding wood to the fire!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I figured you might get fired up reading this one. I’m so tired of trying to figure out who’s still buying this bullshit, it can’t get anymore obvious that he’s out over his fucking skis, he’s beyond compromised at this point. I could go for a marshmallow. See you at the bonfire. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Oohh!
This just keeps building and the last line nailed it amigo.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adel. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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wowee this is menacing I can feel your heat and displeasure ❤️
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Well that was the desired effect, nice to know I delivered. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Talk about mic drops. Damn! Excellent my friend!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brandon. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thanks for your continued support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian love your writes vuz. Always a deep thinking
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I try to keep things interesting. lol. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Angel. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That it does, and it’s not pretty to watch. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Opposites and Gravitational Longing… Lemon tea, my friend, lemon tea!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, PAR. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Lemon tea, indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Your wording and poem is superb. Great piece for the deep thinker.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. You rock, brother.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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this picked at my claustrophobic side very dark I myself want an ocean send off so I can be sand great write ❤️