Exquisite letters Damien.Your descriptive tones are impressive.

Kenn

excellent write

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I love the pick. Sleezy monopoly. The poem went perfect with it

Phenomenal write, Nick. A great read my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Haha!! You get it
Capitalism is a double-edged sword. Can’t avoid it
Always swing with leverage

Poetic dopeness and a timely write

Much respect

Naaj

You need a Murad

very nicerrrr

yes nice

That is so sad. Nothing at all.

Noooooooooo

Other peoples wives….lol

You can say anything to me….

And you my dear are a miracle.💋

Love the Dr. Suess format. Fun piece, despite the sadness.

My mom once shared with me that she and my dad never lost their passion for each other and were still, er. active until shortly before he died at 84. I wish all couples could be that lucky.

Love your rhyme!!!

But JFC I pray to never be this woman!! No nothing? At all? Ever? It’s quite miserable. :’( Great poem. xx
~P.G💋

Peter, congrats on your hardware for this piece! It’s truly excellent and you are definitely deserving! The rhyme is brilliant. The meter is spectacular. The subject matter is disturbing, but that’s what poetry is about. Despite the depressing circumstances, you still manage a subtle tongue in cheek sort of literary smirk… capped off by this reference to silverware.

Brilliant

Ah, Peter (and I choose that address on purpose, of course), folie a deux of the wurst kind (sorry, couldn’t resist), but terrible enough to be a winner, eh, P? A nice write. had me chuckling for sure. A nice job here.