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Read MoreI stumble over metaphorsb/c language isn’t enough for youand silence is too muchbut I should probably say…I’m spillin out all over the placeall tangled up in half formed thoughtsdraggin my feelins thru the dirtto try to make them look...
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appreciate that
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hello dearest poet I’ve always enjoyed the way you write just something special about it 💕
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I really appreciate that.
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Powerfully penned, Ambjr. This is an incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Brenda, I cannot imagine the pain you’re going through. Losing a parent is nothing compared to losing a child. My heart and prayers with you. You can do him justice now for holding onto all the memories and writing about them. I hope that helps a lil’.
Daniel
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hello Daniel thank you for the love I don’t want to quit writing but I can’t get past my sadness in it 💕
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Your beautiful tribute Brenda is heavenly. My thoughts go out to you. xo
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thank you graciously dearest Keith I don’t want to be sad anymore but it occurs to me I am altered I deeply appreciate your presence and love here 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you dearest Damian I appreciate the love here 💕
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hello beautiful Angel thank you what a tender and loving song…it’s very hard I keep remembering the day he was born and his milestones I miss him…I want to quit being sad but I don’t know how…I appreciate you listening 💕
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Read MoreYou were worried aboutthe storm, so youinvited it in,wanting to control thedamage through yourkindness and friendship.But you can't.The storm doesn't havea conscience.It will never be a cutepet on your leash.
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So well said and powerfully executed. a fine poem.
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Much appreciated.
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hello dearest Thomas I think you are the storm powerful write 💕
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Much appreciated.
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. Incredible execution my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks.
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Thank you.
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Read Moretakes faith all day to believe in true love all night to say no to temptation with many judging eyes many pressures in life feels like I'm going mad you’re suffering within your own mindcan there just be nothing...
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This is a mind blowing piece. Well done.
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That’s such a great compliment. Thanks very much, friend.
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Powerfully penned, Nick. Another level on this write, nicely done my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for the read. Much appreciated.
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I like this. The in-between verses enhance the piece very well.
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I do like to have a bit of a chorus in some of my poetry. Shows my love of music. Thanks for the read, much appreciated.
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I like different. Very much a high compliment for me.
Thanks for the read. Much appreciated.
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Read Moreshe never likes to think too much she rather flirt with men at the bar looking cute with her short shorts and tank top takes them back to her place yeah, the rent's pass due and the dishes need done but she forgets all about that when...
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Love this. Your stories are intriguing and raw.
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Always felt like I needed to keep my poetry raw. I never wanted to censor anything down.
Thanks for the read, much appreciated.
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Uncompromisingly penned, Nick. Raw and to the point, and it goes on in the world today. Powerful work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I think it goes on a lot, for sure. We all have are ways of dealing with life. Everyone has and addiction. Life can beat us down also so sometimes it’s easier to just embrace those addictions.
Thanks for the read, friend. Much appreciated.
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Hehe, in her own way yes. I kinda loosely based this off of a friend of mine. Though I made her sound like more of a slut haha. But she was very flirty, the life of the party kinda person. Whenever you could get her to talk seriously though it would be about how she was having a lot of family issues. Which showed me that the flirting was a bit of a way to deal with those emotions.
Thanks for the read. Much appreciated.
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Fantastic!