Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you Gus for keeping up with me. xoxo

Chère F.,
Love it that you post more often.
And I read all of them.

My favorite sentence in this poem is:

Sometimes thing happen because it could not be held back

Wish I had thought of that. It tells me that I can’t possibly control everything. A comforting thought!

I hope your Tuesday will be happy and full of inspiration.
Warm greetings, Gus

hello beautiful Fia this is a profound write ❤️

So true

Outstanding piece. Well said!

No way! You gotta have hope always!
Old story: There were two boys, one was a pessimist and the other an optimist. They were both put in a barn full of horse crap for a day. At the end of the day, the old man opened the door to see how the boys were doing. The pessimist was far back in the corner, on his tiptoes, complaining about all the shit and the smell. While the optimist was crouched down, frantically flinging the horse crap all over the place. The man asked that boy what was he doing. The boy said “With all this fresh horse shit, there’s gotta be a pony in here somewhere!
But anyway, your write is on point with many of the days for us all. An accurate description of the struggle for basic sanity, at least!

That’s cool. I actually get much of my motivation from reading. it’s the words tumbling around in my head that create little scenarios that I build from. A lot! Music sets a mood, though, yes. Can’t live without it!

The fifth stanza was it for me. I the hopeful questions to get the right answer. Very good and sultry

Such longing in this piece

hi Brandon the meaning here is not lost on me ❤️

Thanks Damian!