Do you want to echo
Do you want to start a flame
Do you want to trace the secrets
We alone can only name
I’ll shake you til you open
Make me tremble til I rise
Together we can drown
In hunger’s sweet surprise
Do you want to shiver
Do you want to burn
Do you want to find the mysteries
We alone can only learn
If I make you all unraveled
Can I dance inside your cries
Together as we fall
In hunger’s sweet surprise
Do you want to linger
Do you want to roam
Do you want to find the rapture
We alone can call a home
If I melt into your memory
Will you wrap yourself in mine
Together as we drift
From hunger’s sweet surprise








Beautifully penned, Brandon. Excellent write with an amazing flow and precise rhymes my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
The fifth stanza was it for me. I the hopeful questions to get the right answer. Very good and sultry