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That is a very observant and true comment, “what is right for one is not right for all”. Where humankind goes wrong is when we unfortunately take the “I’m better than you” position of, “what is right for me is also right for you; whether you like it or not”.
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Powerfully penned, Angel. Excellent write my friend. Really dig how you pull inspiration from songs. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Sometimes current events lend themselves well for introspection of how we fit into this crazy thing called life.
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hello dearest Brandon this is very powerful honestly I feel helpless to the future and presnt great write ❤️
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Thank you Crimsin. I always appreciate you stopping by.
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Powerfully penned, Brandon. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. Always a pleasure!
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Read MoreI wrote this poem with no AI interference at all, nope none of that. The only thing AI did was help me get my poem onto this picture. That’s it. Thank you
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The Queen is a dark bad ass. Like the lay out and the rhyme scheme.
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Hello there Fia 🙂 thanks for stopping and thank you for commenting. i’m glad you enjoyed this piece
Thank you❤️
Jackie
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Hello Honoria,what a treat to see you here.
Like I was telling Crim it took me all night to write this poem. I’m pretty happy with the outcome. Thanks for looking, sweetheart.
Miss you
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Hello Damian.
Always a pleasure to see you on my page. I appreciate you too thank you my friend.
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Hi there vision, thank you. It means a lot and thank you for reading it and commenting. Appreciate you.
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Thank you very much Abby appreciate you.
Jackie xx
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redzone posted in the group National Poetry Month
Diversity
Being a city boy
with Native roots,
I have always loved the feel
of cool, dew-laden grass
licking my toes;
the scent of pine needles
on the forest floor;
the way a blue butterfly
will sometimes land
on your outstretched hand.
As I wrap all these thoughts
inside my heart,
I begin to see the balance of life.
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Very good…. I love this part the way a blue butterfly
will sometimes land
on your outstretched hand.
As I wrap all these thoughts… A beautiful metaphor.. like if a butterfly can sense our thoughts . I do feel they sense those things too. Nice work… Keep it up-
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Thanks Navina, I am glad you found this poem enjoyable. It means a lot and I appreciate your comment
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Of course .. poetry is always good to read. My mind is always thinking so I write it down haha.
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Read MoreShe moves around with cautionNever knowing when "they" may appearParanoia has been setting inShe knows there realEveryone is telling her there notShe'll witness "them" from the corner of her left eye"They" look like little children whisperingAt times they'll look...
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Okay you know I am a scardy cat but this is good.
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Appreciate it Fia. Thank You!!
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Thanks for reading PAR.
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Interesting choice. the Serenity prayer and this time of human existence. Grant us the wisdom to know the difference. So may never know and some need to muster the courage to do what is right. The issue is what is right for one is not right for all..A thought. This is a good piece.