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    Standing Still

    What would happen if time stood still Would a tear still drop Would the heart still beat Would that moment still be etched in memory Words can never be taken back When both cheeks are slapped there is no other to give Wounds that are...

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    • Nice write Fia.

      I’m not sure if time even exists in the universe…..seems like a human construct.

    • Unfortunately some live in snow globes. Frozen in the same memories and misfortunes.
      A well written, thought provoking poem, with a good concept. Well done, Fia! “)

    • Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.

      Damian

    • Chère F.,
      How have you done this, with almost each line/sentence a different perspective.
      You always seem to surprise me and it looks like maybe it’s surprising you that you do.
      What a lovely way to start a new week!
      Love it to bits!
      Warm greetings, Gus

    • To me, time as a gift. None of us knows, how long their lives will last. I think, it is most important to use the gift of time we receive to find out who we are, why we are here and how to live a life in harmony and at peace with ourselves and all of creation.
      A well written and meaningful poem, dear Fia!

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    “Differences between us. I know that some people see 'em.(Can't it be) black and white (you and me?)” black is to whiteasday is to night color is to contrastaslight is to shadows cast melanin is to skinasyang is to yin love is to...

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    • I love the duality of this piece.

      • Duality…I like that word. What easily appears as “black and white” in clarity to some, appears as biased misperception to others. Perspective is always open to differing interpretations.

    • Beautifully penned, Angel. Another excellent write with amazing flow and inspired by music my friend. I concur with Fia. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Oooo… this is good… particularly the last one….

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    Enheduanna Chapter 4: Act 2

    Summary:Anna returns to her quarters to find her maid (ILum) and scribe (Sagadu) having sex. She interrupts them to tell them that she was summoned to her father's court.She tells them that they should make love to her as...

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    Enheduanna Chapter 3: Act 1

    Summary:Anna, daughter of King Sargon of Akkad, is summoned to her father's court. Sargon describes how he occupied Sumer and how he captured king Zage-Si and had him paraded into the city with a dog leash on his neck...

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