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Read MoreStatic radio gives me the shakesSensitive to light, my belly achesRed holes infected my suspicious legGreen water mucus as baby Jesus loves to beg Pill popping dope creates a milk dud of a manThe white swans turn black, sacrifice the...
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Thanks man. Appreciate the comment.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. This write has layers my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Glad you enjoyed Damian. Thanks!!
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It reads like a song. I enjoy the lyrical quality and the way the rhyme and cadence propel the reader through this brutal inventory of sickness and despair. It has the perfect structure for a darkly beautiful rock ballad.
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Cool. Love the description you wrote. Thanks Romaj.
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This is brilliant, dear Keith – the imagery, the use of opposites and the meaningful words! The end of September is the beginning of a new and pretty dark season. Yes it is all letting go, decay and death. But nature shows us how to die with dignity and grace. Birth and death belong to the same circle of life. Hope guides us through the valley of shadows until we reach the light again.
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A lovely comment Elke. Thank you.
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I love nursery rhymes. Waiting for more!
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Thanks Paulo. You rock!
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Read MoreI was discouraged at therapy that my face was hideousNo one knew a sinner unless they looked at their fatherThe mother of your sons biological abortionLike a pistonLike a slug waiting to eat saltDisintegration of the molten force underneath...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. This is classic you my friend. The Dr. Seuss of horror. I’ve missed you brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Miss you too Damian. Appreciate the feedback!
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This poem is raw and fearless. The line about the father hit especially hard – it carries so much weight and truth. The imagery throughout is visceral and powerful, like a scream turned into poetry.
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Thanks for the awesome feedback!
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That’s frikin awesome ⭐