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Read MoreI'm living on an excuseThe night destroys meSo much of nothing racing through my mindI lie to continue each dayNo one knows what I mean but meIf you were to hold my hand,There would be no emotion, no warmthThere's...
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I’m not sure if I would enter anyone’s prison. I don’t want to enter my own! Thanks Fia for the awesome comment.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. Some questions have complicated answers. Appreciate you.
Damian
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They sure do. Thanks Damian.
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Read MorePoetry wasn’t a choice.It showed up at my doorlike a small, rabid animalI needed to nurture. Like a scar,like my eye color. Before book sales,before applause,before anyone gave a damn. I was jaded by color.Sunsets weren’t cute.They were edible —pink and orange,soul...
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The last stanza is brilliant. Love it and the poem. Great work!
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Thank you.
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Brilliantly penned, Thomas. Preach my brother, preach! You nailed this out of the park. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, my friend.
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Awesome.
Indeed, it’s that little angel/demon upon our shoulder, compelling us to write something, anything, to relieve the pressure of wanting to say something to the void. Life?Love?Pain?Loss? All of it.
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Thank you. I agree…it is nice when someone acknowleges us.
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Excellent ink & Not a single drop wasted .. Neville 😎👍
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Thank you, my friend.
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Yep. That’s just the way it is. We create because that’s how we deal with the world.
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so true.
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That last stanza…is everything. It’s never about accolades. It’s because we must. Damn…
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So true.
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Read MoreThey would both pretend at night during sex that they were having an orgasmFor her it's real easyShe could just say that she's cumming, make some noise and that's thatFor him, when he said he was gonna cum, he'd...
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well they each found someone they cared for perhaps not enough to count on maybe they counted on each other that is enough great write ❤️
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Thank you Brenda xo
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You’ve always had the knack of making me utterly mind boggled Keith. It truly is a gift lol.. loved it! xx
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Cool. Glad you enjoyed this. Appreciate it..xo
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Some orgasmic happy ending! Great little love tale, Visions – Harriet-Jacqui xx
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Hello hj. Appreciate the feedback & read. Thanks!!
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You’re welcome! I enjoyed you!
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Cleverly penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian.
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Great work. You nailed it.
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Appreciate that Thomas. Thanks!
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Read MoreShe has a problemShe worships drugsShe has a boyfriend who is a dealer & userShe just recently gave birth to a baby girlThey live in this crack house that you wouldn't send your worst enemy to live inFilth, roaches,...
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I hate this world sometimes sad truth dearest Keith ❤️
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It is sad. Thank you Brenda. xo
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Hauntingly penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend, unfortunately the daily truths of this world are quite evil. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Sad but true Damian. Thanks my friend.
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People who deal and push the drugs are the demons. The innocents are always the one that suffers.
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Oh so true Fia. Appreciate the comments.
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Read MoreShe hated violence and sexShe believed to much of it was ruining our youthShe made sure her two sons aged 11 & 14 weren't exposed to this smut anywhere in lifeShe has a drinking problemOften, she would monitor their...
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I just read a story about a mother like this and the kid killed his mother and a sibling I think he was driven to it… you can’t shelter them that much and expect they would be okay… too bad the boys died great write ❤️
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Thank you Brenda. Too many sickos out there. Appreciate it!
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Pricks live forever. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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HA! Yes. Pricks do live forever! Thanks man.
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There are only so many things we can shelter our kids from. And even then, it doesn’t last forever. Still didn’t see this one coming….you always keep my on my toes my dear friend. xx
~P.G💋
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Absolutely correct. This women was out of her mind. A true nut job. Thanks PG xo
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Dark poem and interesting end question. Would you enter if I were to lock you in my prison? We all have our own prisons at some point in time. to enter someone else’s is …would be difficult. Good piece.