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Read MoreAbout 15 years ago I was watching the local news. One of the main stories was of a young man aged 20 being murdered. Not by a criminal, or his friends, but by the police.The boy who had mental...
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It does. Many thanks for being the brave soul to read and comment.
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Read MoreThe fluttering in my stomachIgnites the pain in my chestAs a gunshot with silver pelletsFragments of the moontucked in my lungs, and in my heartSometimes grinding my liver and teethIn a fit of lunar epilepsySee: I am a flower...
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Powerfully penned, M.E. Into the book it belongs! Felt these words my friend, nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian! Highly appreciated!
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Okay, it sounds like it may be time for you to have a little fun – get on a roller coaster with shorts and no underwear, maybe ask that girl out you met at the coffee shop. Hey, if I was next door… ya know. No burning entrails.
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Thank you, DK! Your comments work magic! “)
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If you are the magician, you have the power to bend and reshape this reality. You live the life of a poet. But what type of poet are you? Nice spill.
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Nah, I am not a magician. But I am a voulanteer to your show. You are the magician. Hahaha. Thank you for your kind comment! “)
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Wicked words that equal a kickass write. Great!
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Thank you, Brother! It means a lot “)
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Thank you, Adira! “)
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This is raw and honest, while still deliberate.
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Thank you, Surprise_Guest! I appreciate it! “)
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Powerful and raw. Great work.
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Thank you, Thomas! “)
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Read MoreCrazy times of dime bagdreams and fevered riverscenes that would drownthe lice in Bukowski's beard.There was a quiet stretch ofsand on the Iowa River, notfar from downtown.I pitched a tent in the woodsbehind that little beach.Blue herons and blue...
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Brilliantly penned, Thomas. A flawless write my friend. Like this one a lot. Appreciate you.
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Thank you, my friend.
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It’s like Tom Sawyer Comes of Age! LOL. Why should you have backed out? Maybe you better not answer that. Anyway, it all sounds fantastically romantic, and I love the rough, woodsy imagery and casual intimacy. An epic poem about an epic experience, Thomas.
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Thank you so much.
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Great atmosphere. I can feel every move you make with this poem. Wonderful in execution & delivery.
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Thank you.
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Read MoreWelcome Backstage, I’m Damian DeadLove. Tonights band has a very interesting story on writing a song that far exceeded expectations of what it’s initial purpose was. I’m talking about Britain’s own, Black Sabbath. Often credited as one of the forefathers...
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That’s super fascinating history, Damian. I don’t really follow Black Sabath, but I am familiar with that particular tune. I’m stunned that Ozzy never wrote lyrics. The dude was super fortunate to hang around people who did.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, DK. So glad you enjoyed the story my friend. He attempted to write a few lyrics, but they were never standout lyrics. Plus he was fortunate enough to have guys around that could write lyrics. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Sabbath is one of the most influential bands on earth. Whether you like Ozzy or Dio or Tony Martin, All of their line ups are special. Except the last album they did titled “13”. That’s pure shit!!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you enjoyed the story my friend. I agree, each lineup had its appeal. “13” was not that great. Especially when in comparison with the last record they did with RJD. Under the “Heaven & Hell” moniker. That was a killer album. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I never knew that about Ozzy. I always loved how unapologetic he was. He was just being him and that is that.
Great write
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you liked the story my friend. Yeah, he attempted writing lyrics a couple of times. He’s no Geezer Butler. However he did write the vocal melodies. I’m a fan of him, that’s just the facts when it comes to what he contributes to songwriting. Appreciate you.
Damian
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So another case of the unexpected stealing the show & in this case, saving the day! Maybe record labels should start letting the music makers do their thing & see much it nets their infamous gawdawful bottom line. Gah…another intriguing story, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you enjoyed the story my friend. Very true, but the business men and bean-counters think they know best. It’s always up to the talent to save the day. There are more to come my friend, glad you love the series. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerfully penned, Keith. This is a sad one my friend. Pulls at these old heartstrings. Unfortunately, you’re completely right this happens far too often. 9 shots 5 cops. Somebody shot more than once. Powerful message brother. Appreciate you.
Damian