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What begun will be finished when I decide just how!! Yes, is a short-ish story, Fia Naturie; hope you enjoy what’s to come. Many thanks for your welcome. 🙂
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Interesting. Welcome to Stars Rite! Appreciate you.
Damian
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Many thanks for your welcome. Hope to continue or finish my short story later today, Saturday.
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Well, now you’ve got my curiosity up. What has happened to give Drenna this new direction and determination? Why has she been invisible? C’mon, Emma, we’ve got to know! (It’s so great to see you!)
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Need help here. Do I delete the summary and start the story, please very much?
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Read MoreYr unig wirionedd Love flew out of your mouth in hieroglyphics like an invitation to a sky wedding writ on the wrists of kites Dawn ghosted, as a ship’s prow through windows tangled in curtain rigging in the way silence enters an emptying room sunrise gallows hang heavy...
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The boat theme in this is eerily good.
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Thank you. There is something enchanting, and yet, eerie of the ocean. It’s bigger & greater than human kind.
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The first line immediately sucked me in.
You do not waste any words with your poetry and you let us see what we see. I really like that in poetry.
You are an amazing wordsmith.
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Thank you. Even as a kid, on a rough council estate, always found scribbling to be cathartic.
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Read MoreThe moon on her dress corruscates my fingers with cobalt shards of icebergs, rolling fingerprints beyond fabric Tidal hair breaches the breakers down her back, the last waterfall on earth weeps for every desire lost at sea Catching the pearls of her eyes in trawls of my dilated bleeding, if...
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You make me think…
It’s cool, I’m good at it!
I enjoy the complexity of your writes. The vocabulary. The nuanced messages. Even, a word I never knew until you shared it.
So thank you for the enhanced ability of your writes. It makes me stronger by reading them. And enjoying them.-
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As always, you are too kind Mark. I don’t miss many from DU, but you are definitely on the missed list.
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This truly shows your intelligence and talent. Very supernacular.
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Ha. I’m loving “supernacular” Sounds a bit like an Oasis song. Thank you A.
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I agree with previous commentors on the talent.
I like the analogies presented in this write.
Especially fond of the last stanza…reading this makes me feel like I saw her memories
just before they entombed her under the cathedral floor.j.
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Thank you.
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Read MoreOn a day that wasfraughtwith anxiety and anger,I sailed onto theother side.The two pens thatblew up in my handforeshadowed theprolific writingstreak to come.Six poems today,a personal best.Bukowski would beproud.He might evenwonderHow I did it withoutwhoresbooze andcigarettes.It was easy.I had...
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lucky
I wish I could just let the telephone
ring
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Thanks for stopping by.
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hello dearest Thomas a day full of bluebirds and poetry lovely 💕
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THANK YOU.
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I appreciate it. Thank you.
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I can relate. Well said Thomas.
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Thank you.
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A little Vivaldi can go a long way. I have been tuning in to classical myself recently. Better to soothe the mind with fine music than to stuff it full with world conflict. Good to find you here Thomas.
Chris
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Good to see you, Chris. Thanks.
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Powerful indeed & that’s a fact .. Neville
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Thanks, my friend.
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