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Read MoreIN THE REALM OF EROTICA We dive into the realm of erotica where passion and desire never cease where words dance naked in front of us and our bodies yearn to be released We explore every inch of each other In the depths of our souls...
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Thank you 😊 I’m glad you like it.
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Standing up applauding this. I agree whole heartily. Bravo
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Thank you 😊
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Beautifully penned, Lizz. Such a passionate write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The physical is 10%, but the real satisfaction is the 90% mental connection.
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Read MoreSometimes I don’t write for beauty. I write because if I don’t, I’ll drown in silence. These words—they’re the only air I got left. So if you read me… just know— This ink’s my heartbeat. For years, I’ve written without pause— sometimes with tears, sometimes with...
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To cool and it’s relatable to all that write, tight
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Thank you 😊
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Chère L.,
Beauty.
The Chinese version:
Beauty in the woods, where no one can hear it, is still beautifulThe greater Amsterdam version:
Beauty which is shared with other people, growsIt’s almost akin to:
Sometimes giving away makes me richer.
All this and more you gave us with this wonderful post.If you’re American: Thank you very much
In all other cases: (please) keep on keeping on (Curtis Mayfield)
Kind regards, Gus-
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Thank you 😊 and no I’m Canadian
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Powerfully penned, Lizz. Excellent write nicely transformed into lyrics my friend. It’s the little differences between the two that gives them each their own personality, while mirroring each other’s point in substance. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks 😊
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I have to agree with Damian.. he says it best! 😉
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Thank you 😊
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Lizz wrote a new post
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Read MoreIn a quiet realm where echoes gleam,Where thought becomes both thread and dream,There stands a Cabinet, carved by Muse—A keeper of truths the heart might choose. Its hinges hum with stories untold,Its shelves are lined with myth and gold.Within, the...
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Fantastic! Welcome to the site.
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Thank you 😊
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I love that this is not mere page to pen line..welcome to Stars Rite
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Thank you 😊
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This is incredible writing. I’m eager to see more from you. Welcome.
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Thank you so much 😊 though I’m still trying to get the hang of this site
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You’ll get used to it. Are you on any other sites?
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No, I was on one called DUP Deep Uderground Poetry but it’s closed down.
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Most everyone here was on that site. Some never returned after it closed.
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Excellent 🌼
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Thank you 😊
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Beautifully penned, Lizz. The thrill of the write still stirs in us writers. Excellent flow and wordplay my friend. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you 😊 this poem is about my book I’m trying to put together.
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Chère L.,
Hope this finds you well.Love your Cabinet poem.
I read your introduction with pleasure and noticed your intention to put some of your poems to music.
I love that idea.
In fact, most of my poems are put to music. And what I post on StarsRite are poems of other people, as my Dutch poems are so much better that my English ones.So (in short):
Welcome here and maybe one day we can do a cooperation.
Kind regards, Gus-
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Thank you 😊 I’m glad you like it. I wrote it because I’m creating a book and it’s going to be the opening in my book though it’s a working progress.
Sure.
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Thus opened Pandora’s Box of erotic dreams, Lizz! Wonderful to have you aboard. – ‘HJ’
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Thank you 😊
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Totally love your flow Lady, to tight
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Chère L.,
Yes yes yes, amen to that.
It confirms our attraction to each other, our love, our being human, everything and than some.
And you wrote it in the best possible way.
I love it a lot.
Kind regards, Gus