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    honestly

    your deep currents drag me underdown into the darkwhere I get a good look at youanger tingles the senses, hereyour malice is the thriving emotion in this placewomen are meant for usingand feelings get in the way of your...

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    • A woman in love with the monster detonates. That wonderful imagery. What an explosion. Love this

      • hello lovely Fia good afternoon thank you graciously I deeply appreciate your thoughts ❤️

    • Beautifully penned, Brenda. Absolutely amazing imagery and a stellar write. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    dear beauty

    dear beauty please bestow on me your essenceso I will glow with the feelinga lovely fountain springs eternal in mesuch succinct endeavor, to garner your favormy thoughts dance on the mistsan ethereal lass before meconjuring my immortal lustswith a...

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    • Beautifully penned, Brenda. Magnificent write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • good morning dearest Damian thank you graciously forgive me for not interacting more I go through quiet phases but I think of you ❤️

    • Chère C.,
      Simply beautiful!!!
      Love it to bits! Love the artwork as well.
      This really makes it feel extra unique.
      Warm regards, Gus

    • Beautiful ink Crimsin. Thank you for sharing 🙏🏻

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    Love the beat. a head banger

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    forever

    speaks the night of breath and formcold we turn to stonein our dire hour left aloneno one to atone but ourselvesby this sigh I speakof lost days and full onesmaudlim and melancholy I roamsinister faith, teaches us to hopehonest...

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    • I’ve missed reading your introspective heart. Beautiful as always.

      • hello beautiful Betty I’ve missed you very much out of all the people I know I’m happy this poem spoke to you I hope you are doing well me I’m wandering ❤️thank you for being here…

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write as always my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    The Terror in the Community

    The Terror In The Community. The community was designed as a euphoric cornucopia of green, lush plant life, all underwater in a 25-gallon tank. Introducing into this tank were three. You heard me, three fanciful goldfish. One was an Oranda that...

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    • Cleverly penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend, I always enjoy your amazing storytelling. Appreciate you, cuz.

      Damian

    • Fantastic. Love it, Fia.

    • Why not just flush Maurice?? Get rid of the non team player! maybe he can go rule the sewers or something, LOL.
      I’m just being logical! Or put his ass with a male Beta (Japanese Fighting fish). No more Maurice!

      • lol I have a friend that said I should send Maurice to meet Davey Jones Locker in the toilet too. lmao. Thank you Stxian

    • Chère F.,
      I’d love it if this would find you mellow and at ease, just before the weekend.

      I’ve read your poem and I don’t understand it.
      blunt Dutch analysis.
      But I love the kiss by Brancusi (singer museum Leiden the Netherlands) without understanding too.
      I love some of Rothko’s work too.

      Understanding isn’t always about what you/I can grasp at any time!
      I love this write of yours and I think it’s raking me a little more time.

      So:
      Please be patient with me!
      I’ll be back, I promise! Have a very nice weekend…..
      Warm Waving from a distance, Gus

      • Thank you Gus, its not a poem its a short story. I have a goldfish that is a bully. lol Have a good weekend.

    • Cook Maurice and have him as an appetizer. He’d be with you forever. Great story Fia.

    • This starts playful but slowly tightens into something darker.
      Power and cruelty don’t need much space to show themselves.

    • Clean slate works also. Lol

    • I think you’ll need to build a little underwater jail and keep Maurice there as punishment.
      This was great, yes it’s frustrating that your fishes kept dying but I love how you told this story not just as the observer but almost like a deity that you had power but they kept dying on you while you weren’t looking.
      Awesome work.

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