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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Thank you for sharing your musings with us!
Life comes without a safety net. To think that we have control is an illusion. But everyone of us has a reliable inner compass knowing what’s right or wrong and guiding us. It’s called intuition, and we can trust it. It’s your tour guide while climbing mountains. It won’t lead you astray. -
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The first line is amazing, gripping. The rest of the poem builds well. I’m a minimalist. The first line can hold its own.
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Chère F.,
I don’t wonder/care why your.work resonates so deep with me; I am happy that it does.
This is another one to be grateful for.I am sure you are familiar with the: use it or lose it thing?
It’s not applicable for muscles alone! I truly believe that.
My wish for you is to use it a lot!
Warm greetings, Gus -
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The world needs fighters who will stand for things that are right. Of course you get tired, but if the spirit is strong, the strength will come.
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M.E wrote a new post
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This is a hell of a write, my friend — very powerful; but I see a typo, I think, when you wrote, “In a battle of write and earse” when I believe that last word should be “erase,” yes?
Also, you may not be aware of the big LISTEN button that now lives on this page and no doubt many more of yours as well as many others who labour but are not aware of our unwanted AI reader who has hitch-hiked on the work of everyone who has not attached the #excludetx tag to their work.
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This is quite mind-blowing.
I admire the punchy and reflective lines through each stanza.
I can sense this is a personal piece, it describes an emotional journey taking place.
It is enlightening and tragic at the same time.
A pleasure to take in. x
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend, I’ve always been a fan of your musings. This one does not disappoint. Nicely done. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian