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    Romeo and the Priest

    P=Romeo, what makes you so sad? R=My emotions are my own why do you ask? P=I hoped life was treating you kinder than it did before R=Before when? When my love walked out the door. P=Why not open your heart for someone new....

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    • Cleverly penned, Fia. Excellent write as always my friend. Dig the Shakespeare vibe, also I’ve always thought you’re amazing at writing dialogue. Nicely done. Appreciate you, Cuz.

      Damian

    • nice, I like this… you should develop this into a Series (play)

    • I love this, Fia. Dito, Sam.

    • I like new concept poetry & love the fact it is possible to listen to the words although I note this is not your voice Fia .. still it kind of fits with my idea of Romeo’s voice ..

      • Thank you Neville. I was sitting here thinking of how he would sound and feel if things were different. I may try my hand at writing a play, but I want his voice to stay true to the original. It’s a thought.

    • All is lost for poor Romeo and he’s doomed to a lonely darkness, then… the clouds break, the sun shines again, and all is well. I love happy endings. Hopefully, it will last.

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    awaken child of the dawn

    meditating in the energy I secret my deepest feelingsallowing them to rise as incencehigh and higher into the heavenswhere they are understoodwith vibrations of recognitionI'm remembered fondlysacred art of the wayto sing in poetryit is the language of the...

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    Disbelief

    If variety is the spice of life my sobriety is equivalent to rolling seven on a cubic diceStanding tall like united lice on laboratory prisoned mice will sooth the soul and mute the sighsGoodbyes are poor receptions in disguiseWicked...

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    Four Quiet Seasons - One Loud Man

    Four Quiet Seasons - One Loud ManWould you please just look at me,I tend to oscillate and goaround and around in increasinglyunpredictable circles,chasing my tail, but hardly making  even the faintest sound ..But if the truth was only known...

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    big wheel

    escalating in the feelingmy thoughts sky scrapedreaming of days in the sunworried about the future not reallyworry gets you nothing but more dramainstinct and faith in something bigger than you is vitalwe are powerful beings changing things up just...

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    • This is cool. I relate to the nervous energy at times I just keep going.;))

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Another excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Chère C.,
      A little rhyme replying your lovely poem:

      This photo’s truly showing
      What I always knowed*
      Parking on the sidewalk is
      How to define off road

      So rope in a big wheel
      and you’ll be certain of
      One big wheel will be enough
      If you want lasting love

      Clumsy? Yes!
      But so what!
      There’s more than enough people who take themselves too seriously…

      *Dion Dimucci’s past sense of knowing
      Warm greetings, Gus

      • lol I love your offbeat poem I’ve never really been one for money but if I can make some from my artistic edeavors who knows thank Gus ❤️

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