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Read MoreConsciousness unfolding, A peak inside My mind…Fast, then pauseAbsorb the absorbedA pull towards the edge The greater the mind power,Ohh, the betterSensual knot of slow chaos,Unraveling, untieUnpack meDon’t just stare…Explore a bit...
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Thank you for reading. I’m glad you have enjoyed this piece.
I think you’re doing a great job of making this place better for the future generation to come.
I admire the modern aspects of the website.x
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
I appreciate you saying that<3
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That’s true, unfortunately.
We do need to see more new faces. The more input, the better.
I do like the place so far though. x
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Cleverly penned, Rosie. Excellent write really dig this one my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks again, Damian.
You’re like my number one super fan.
I’ll be reading some of your pieces soon. x
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Intelligence is sexy. Nicely worded and wonderfully executed.
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That’s true and I agree.
Thank you for reading. It means a lot to me. x
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You had me with the title! Fantastic word play here!
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I agree, it is captivating.
Thank you for reading. x
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Read Moreripped from the mouth of sound a gapin holewhere hammer should break bone hands dropivory grindin under skinsilence echos where it used to strike scale shattersedges crackinbroken teeth in the dark chords crawl forwarddraggin themselvesthru blood and tone I slam the weight downagainagainas...
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The “cut it off, cut it all the way off ” Just screams “I don’t want this anymore” This holds a lot emotion
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appreciate it
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I like the brutal choice on words.
I can sense a lot of toughness from the writer.
This is slightly mentally challenging in a way that captivates the reader.
Ready for some more…
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thank you Rosie
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
“chords crawl forward
draggin themselves
thru blood and tone”Powerfully penned, 253. Excellent write my friend it always gets interesting when the piano is mentioned in your work. So many great lines but the one above just spoke to me. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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appreciate you Damian…always an easier write when involve piano.
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Crimson, your poem reads much of laden sadness and reluctance. Love sometimes becomes distorted and misrepresented in relationships when love, respect, integrity and honesty is not reciprocated.
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it’s true those are vital to a healthy relationship thank you graciously ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I can sense a shattered emotional connection.
Decaying miserably, upon disrepair.
Healing is what matters the most going forward. x
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hello lovely Rosie it’s true but sometimes there is no healing I’m schizophrenic and as such I have always accepted less than… thank you for the love on this write ❤️
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thank you dearest Adagio for the love on this ❤️
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I love this. I wrote something similar to this a while ago;)