I like this. The wizbit made me remember Mork and Mindy.

I enjoyed this science fiction story

Phenomenally penned, Sam. Great write, fantastic imagery my friend. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.

Damian

Fantastic, Samuel.

Thanks, Thomas.

Well, I would say you have outdone yourself, Sam — but obviously, you haven’t. A good bit of fun, though. Worthy of a series? Only 14,089 more chapters and you’d have a book, one that would fit in one of those tiny saucers. Keep up the good work, Sam.

Thanks. I’m working on chapter II right now–Dogbik confronts a gas pump and says “take me to your leader”

Power to you Elke💋

Yes. The good things about you should never be the things that you are used or abused for. I love how you still are all of the things that you were before, you’re just not allowing anyone else to have control over it.

You should speak up. Never suppress what you want to say.

I love everything about this poem. It’s plane to me that your passion is unequaled and unequivocal.
I dream, lovingly, of dancing with you under the moon, long hair flowing and both of us in purple wispy silks.

Powerfully penned, Elke. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I can relate. I was also a people pleaser before I stood up for myself.

I was never a people pleaser and probably never will be. The only ones I have respect and love for are the few that give the same to me in return. The rest can go fuck themselves! I love this bold write. You stand tall, showing your strength and determination. A marvelous and powerful piece. xox

A friend once told me “Not everyone deserves your soft.” I am who I am, but they have to prove they deserve the best of me now. I’ll always move with compassion, but if we don’t take care of ourselves…who will? I burnt my filters too. Totally feeling this one!

Beautifully penned, Thomas. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

What a charming little story. I didn’t know how it was going to end up going about halfway through but alls well that ends well.

A heart-warming story, Sam. Your characters always have personality that is lovable in some way…even a cat. 🙂

Ah, the sweet, gentle world of an innocent young girl (I’ve one posted simply, “Girl”).

Sam,
You never fail to touch your readers’ hearts, minds, ‘n souls in bringing to life your characters’ personalities (even a cat’s), and in how they each fit so perfectly into your stories’ always interesting plots … and, your grammar is exemplary.

This is a most lovely piece, and I love the surprise ending.
I hope you like it here, Sam … the site needs your “special” touch! ⁓ Richard🖌

Thank you, Richard.

Thank you. Yeah, scary stuff for Halloween.