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Powerfully penned, Drieks. As I say every time I read your work, you’re an amazing lyricist my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian 🙏🏻
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Always layers in your writes my friend, this one does as well. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously I deeply appreciate you yes it was hard leaving my house of twenty five years 💕
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As above, so below. As within, so without. Always you walk in the liminal light of esoteric thoughts. And always a pleasure to read 🌼
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Ur on to bigger better things fresh start where did u go y haven’t you called miss ur face friend
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hello beautiful Lora I miss you too I’ll call you tomorrow and thank you I hope I like it where I land 💕
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Powerful work. Tremendous.
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hello dearest Thomas it is sad to leave a place you love after so long I will miss the garden thank you for your kind comment 💕
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Hello Brenda. Mesmerizing piece of melancholy poetry. I can feel your pain and sadness. Your heart will find happiness with your new surroundings. All in time. xo
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hello dearest Keith thank you graciously for the love here it’s felt 💕
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Bravo.. Excellent presentation, Fia. Poetry will never die, with so many great writers keeping it alive. Besides, I’m not qualified to do anything else. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You know you are Damian. Thank you 🩷
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Informative piece. The presentation was done well.
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Thank you, Keith 🩷
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Great video. You have a very pleasant voice! ☺️
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Thank you so much 💓
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Poetry is like the moon. It never gets old.
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That is si true, Adagio🩷
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Very true! Like all forms of art…it evolves! Painting, music and POETRY! It desires a response. You may try to evoke one feeling and end up being perceived entirely different! You are great. Poetry will never die! Like love it will be in a multitude of forms.
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Thank you, Paula 🩷
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Thomas W. Case wrote a new post
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Read MoreWriting is my lighthouse whenI'm lost at sea in thedark fogamong the sirens singing theirseductive songs.It is my netthat catches fish to feedme when I'm starving and afraid.An albatross silently looms, whilewaves swell and break against myraft.The kraken yawns...
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A great metaphorical poem, Thomas.
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Thanks.
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this is beautiful in its expression excellent 💕writing is very much the same for me…
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
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great write dearest Thomas very excellent I feel you on this 💕
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So many great, relatable metaphors in this. I enjoyed this.
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Thank you. I appreciate it.
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. This is an excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks, my friend.
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lol. Thank you.
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Willow wrote a new post
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Read Moredo you know what it's liketo sit with your hips & your thighsfrom ass to kneepressed uncomfortably tight...against the person riding yourvery last nerve? when not 5 minutes ago...in full blown fury...you were literally pulling each other's hairwords thrown like rockscolorful phrases...
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Grandma knew exactly what to do with us. 6 of us & she never lost her temper. Good memories…Thank you, girl
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hello beautiful Willow this was a twist I didn’t know where you were going it’s very clever and relateable I had to clean my dad’s grandfather clock when naughty 💕
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I hated getting in trouble. It was usually my cousin & her brother. She was ornery as hell too, would try to hug him when he was so pissed. Grandma had to leave the room to hide her giggles. Thank you, Brenda 🧡
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Brilliantly penned, Willow. Into the book it belongs! Amazing storytelling my friend, I can relate. Not that I got in trouble a lot, but when I did, not a fun time by any means of the imagination. Excellent work, as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Always seemed like disappointing grandma was worse than the punishment itself. So I did my level best to not get in trouble much. Not with grandma, at any rate. 😂 Thank you, my friend
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I love “old timey” pieces. It brings back the good ol days, even if we didn’t know that they were, then. I would’ve preferred the chair over the usual ass whuppin.
But eh, I survived.
It’s always interesting to me how others lived and dealt with their own upbringings. This was a wonderful story indeed. I raised my kids on “time out” instead of spankings, as your story reflects. It’s a better choice.
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Don’t get too cozy in the “old timey” corner. I’m all over the map these days. Who knows where it will take me next?
Yeah, my girl was raised on time out too. Little rascal knew exactly when she was about to land there too. Look me right in the eye & say “I go to time out now?” Good kid…that girl gave me side aches holding in the laughter.
Thank you for the visit. Good to see you roaming the new halls
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It’s good to see YOU here, too.
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Thank you Mary!